Dying Love

I have let you down in so many ways, so many times followed by so many lies.

Truths have been revealed and set me free but you still have your own needs

You search for lust through past flings, all while still being in love with me

I can’t place blame on what you desire when your heart burns dying in the fire

 

You seek a man’s touch to feel good about yourself

But the second they leave you cry by yourself

The need to feel loved is killing you inside

While you can’t seem to grasp onto life

 

You pull him closer, deeper inside

With each thrust you feel so alive

The touch of his lips eases the pain

Temporary, no control of the brain

 

We pay the price for the choices we make

It may not happen now but it will some day

And the more you try the more you lie

The more I realize our love has died

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

These emotions really hit me Aaron. Sometimes insecurity makes us behave a certain way. Maybe immaturity too? You can't be desperate to find love, I think it just finds you. Your subject understands this it seems.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you for the review Ana :) the subject may or may not understand that lol i guess every day is different.

[blueyedany72]

This is wonderfully done. Very touching and emotional. I love the very last line in particular.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you for the review.... I appreciate your comments :)