Those Things I Miss

Dedicated to my dad

I missed you today

I saw a boy and his dad

On their way to a baseball game

And I wondered

Maybe that could have been us

I go to games

And even watch football now

But you don't know that

And that 

I miss

Maybe I could hang with you

On Saturday nights

When mom is tired

And all my friends are busy

But you can't take me

And that

I miss

Years have passed

The world continues on

I have achieved and failed

Wishing to share this all

But I can't

And that

I miss

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[Kena Dawn Augustine]

beautiful poem, talking about family and waht you miss and love about them. it flows very well too. thanks for sharing!