Key Smash

The frustration builds. 

The unknown is there. 

When you cannot describe what your feeling,

What do you do?

What is one to do?

You cannot get help.

You cannot help yourself.

You don't know what to do.

You don't know what's going on.

All you know is its a lot.

It does stop. 

No matter how much you scream and try to slow down time,

It just keeps moving.

Faster and faster.

More and more.

There is nothing you can do.

But what do you say

What do you do

When someone asks you what is going on

When they ask how you feel

It would come out a mess

A key smash of letters and sounds

Because you don't know.

But sometimes that has to be okay.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think expanding on the key smash of letters as a metaphor would be a great direction for this...
as is...it is emotional...but more prose than poetry....and maybe too straightforward...but i see possibilities here.
j.