It rained

It rained

A Poem by Korbyn Rague

He was tired.
He slept.
He awoke.
And then it rained.
He left.
He thought.
He drove.
And then it rained.
He was alone.
He was blue.
so was the sky.
It still rained.
No matter what happened to him.
It still rained.
He didn't like the rain.
It still rained.
He cried.
It still rained.
He screamed.
It still rained.
He searched for shelter.
It still rained.
He never found what he was looking for.
So it rained.

© 2016 Korbyn Rague


Author's Note

Korbyn Rague
Still kinda new with poetry. Hope you enjoyed though!

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amazingly written keep it up and well penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korbyn Rague

8 Years Ago

Thank you cherryblossom! Much appreciated!
Nice poem! There is a lot of sadness and frustration conveyed in not all that many words. And I really like your use of repetition. I think there are a lot of people who could relate to this. It is rather thought-provoking. Good work!
~Anastasia

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Korbyn Rague

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on August 12, 2016
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Korbyn Rague
Korbyn Rague

Kalispell, MT



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Junior in High School; I love to write, I love Speech & Debate, and my dream job is to be a professional author or screenwriter. I learn as I write, as I am sure you see in my progression from oldest .. more..

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