deleting friends

i think on deleting friends (never)
i think on me sometimes i maybe
think that i maybe busy with life
i think that i may need to restore reality
and ignore my fantasy i may dream

in my fantasy i dream that am a famous
too famous to be busy with friends
when that is, my friends are too busy for me
then the quickest way to delete friends
that they delete me, maybe i notice them

 

 

Reviews

[JP thinks the WC is apt..]

This is a brilliantly erratic stream of thought that spills out all over the place. It's very impulsive but there's a pattern in there somewhere, which does come through. The way you've written it, it's as though 'deleting' is something more real, and more serious, than simply pressing a key, or clicking a mouse.

[Isolophobe]

i get a sense of loathing for friends. i can definitely relate to that. i also like the repetition of the word maybe and words rhyming with it.