love is my savior

i stand at the edge
staring into the water
dare i step over the rail
to stand nearer

to end this dispair
oh i step over the rail
so much closer
to the bliss of no more

the water is so inviting
to lure me into nothingness
why can't i just let go
just a few fingers hold me

letting go just one more
so much closer i go
just one finger holds me
why can't i let go

what holds me
to exist with this
oh i feel my love is calling
to bring me back from dispair

love is more inviting
than the water
oh to love is my new desire

oh dear water you must go away
don't try to lure me again
i have a new love

Reviews

[Kevon]

Beautiful words from a beatiful girl,in and out, never met u but theway you write I can tell..., this is a wonderful piece keep on writing

[larryb]

A*s Kicking write C very well done once again :)

[Lizzy]

i have three words and two commas... confusing, meaningful, and AWESOME!!!