Devotion (I love you)

If it werent for you
I werent to know love at all
You taught me all about love

You have become
My beacon for love
A shining light of love

I visualize your lips
Moving to tell me
That you love me

Visualizing your lips
Whispering that
I love you

If we were to break up
I know I will never make it
Never without you

Now I am to cry
But I shall not cry
you took my heart

If I was to switch places I would
I have cried my eyes out
Cause the way you loved me

I have finished my tears
Oh the life I could give you
If I was to switch places

Life ended all so quickly
If I could to switch places
I can go with your love

Reviews

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

It was simple, and that's one of the things that made it likable.

[Kevon]

Love is a common inspiration for poetry, so how u can make it stand out is a beautiful thing, because love is more than rhyming words, It's a feeling that the mouth can always describe..And takes some thought, this shows u have a mind as beautiful as your heart.........kudos to u for this poem

[Brandon]

Lot of emotions here, very nicely done.