as the hot bath felt good

as the hot bath felt good

A Poem by Cece


how do you describe
death as it approaches
all under the influence

the taking of pills
both were full bottles
Vicodin is so handy

but i didnt know Percocet
then is sleeping pills
i dont know Diazepam

 

the both i felt
it cause the room
to become gray

as the clouds were leaking
into the room faces were
that of my dad was a blur

the fading row of lights
as i was rolled down
the corridor of ER

under the influence
under my own hand
i had expected the end

i now have new therapy
the writing which relieves
the stresses that i feel

 

© 2008 Cece


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wow... How brave to share such a heartfelt, sad experience. I'm glad the mission was not a success and even more happy you found poetry.. This poem is from no where else but from the heart, and such poetry desersve no critique, for these a matters peple have no room to say anything, except I"M THANKFUL YOUR STILL HERE AND THAT YOU SHARED YOUR STORY!... a touching one it is. Keep your head up girl, your are beautiful!

much love n respect

-Lalli

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wow... How brave to share such a heartfelt, sad experience. I'm glad the mission was not a success and even more happy you found poetry.. This poem is from no where else but from the heart, and such poetry desersve no critique, for these a matters peple have no room to say anything, except I"M THANKFUL YOUR STILL HERE AND THAT YOU SHARED YOUR STORY!... a touching one it is. Keep your head up girl, your are beautiful!

much love n respect

-Lalli

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt great sadness as I read this and at the end I saw a glimpse of hope. Wonderfully penned.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

death... is empty without a reason .
your poetry is the reason not to die

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like!
you have come to a place of peace in some level with yourself!
and have settled with art... and poetry!
determination i feel!
hope!
i like the poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Cece

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