who is this Anubis

Egyptian mythological god who leads the dead to judgment

fear what is it
i have fear
such that for me
i may be hurt

oh but i have felt
such fear greater
than fear of my own
as such that i feel

when in present
of a fever child
who has fever such
the skin does burn

the fear what is
the temperatures
what is it what happens
that is going to happen

the child seems
to have no more life
as he attempts to sleep
with the temperature that burns

my fear is far greater
then the fear of body
fear of bodily harm myself
fear for the life of the child

the fear grows
with every passing minute
until my chest
heaving with anguish

Reviews

[poddar kushal]

once i wrote on Anubis.i admit it is fearsome. but there is tiny bit of sadness and impending sadness in it."child seems
to have no more life
as he attempts to sleep
with the temperature that burns"-excellent. fear is far greater {than} then the fear of body

[A.r. Bazian]

!!!
speechless!

i wont lay much words that need not to be said! but... very powerful techniques!
and the poem... phew*... intense!

i like!
keep it up!