My bartender

My bartender

A Poem by Cece

 

 

with my shot of fantasy i have no pain

i drink too much cause its offered

i only drink more of fantasy

if you offer up sorrow

shaken not stirred

with the lies

© 2008 Cece


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Fantasy is exactly that "fantasy"
Reality is the
drink that slaps us in the face...
If I had my choice, I'd take a double
shot of fantasy anyday!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The problem with getting drunk on fantasy is that eventually you have to sober up in order to get anything done in life. ;-)

Nice use of metaphor. Good poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i want to know more about fantasy...where do i find this wonderful drink...you drink it in and look at the way you are feeling now...beautiful inside and outside...you are amazing...and i love every drop of you...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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