Fish are made to be eaten

Fish are made to be eaten

A Poem by Cece

 

 
 
Fishing as a sport
Such as in the states
Bugged to watch a good catch
Pictured and released
No such thing in Pilipinas
Oh I could just taste
 

© 2008 Cece


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damm fish contest is the damm sport
they hook the biggest damm fish
oh they look so tastily
but take pictures and released.
i just wonder
when will i taste
the freedom of the release

Posted 16 Years Ago


i wonder if this is as deep as I am taking it. because my fish piece was deeper than i would have expected anyone to understand. My sense is you did. I really like how you summed up such a heavy message in just a few short lines that without really placing yourself deeper the reader wouldn't even understand.
unless it is just about fishing. then it's still just a nice piece.
:) thank you so much for sharing this with me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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