What of a body to give

 

 

If I were to make a poem about my body

What forms of poems do I make

Will I make poems of spiritual

Shall the poem rhyme in rhyming scheme

 

The scheme to show the beauty

The free flow of the lines of the curves

Or show such variations as a body does

This body full of weapons of geography

 

As the body is with hills and valleys

A road along a cliff to fall off

Smooth curves and of sharp turns

To give surprising depth of shape

 

Shall the poem sing as a song

With songs of smoldering fires

Shall the poem speak of complete abandonment

To show that this body is made only for love

 

Should be a poem of fixed form

To show the flow of unbroken lines

Not to be covered but only the covering in your love

Your love covers me as a sheet from my bed wraps me

 

The poem has the lighter touch

For lighter the touch the better

Ideally the lighter touch of love

Lighter touch is the desirable

 

Reviews

[Bhabie]

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[STEVEN]

desirable is how i would describe your body...if his poem is about your body then i can say for sure that you have the curves and crevices that are most desirable...i love every inch of your perfect body...and you write a poem about your body and every word is as perfect as you are...thank you for sharing with us poem of love...for your body is to be loved by only special people...and i would love to be one of those special people...you are amazing...and you write so beautifully...i can't get enough of your writing...keep posting and i will keep commenting...love you honey...you are the best...

[Danielle Asher]

i really like the concept of this poem. I kind of feel like you can revisit it and go deeper. It is like I want you to go another level deeper in with it. It is such a good concept. You did a good job I just would love to see how much more you could give your readers.
Thanks so much for sharing.

peace,
D