what pissed me off

i'm rapping in gangsta

what is the cause? i dont know
all superficial or summary of all
spend too much time on a site
all too much hatas for this shawdy

left cause all the hatas in my profile
or some viewing with nobody reviewing
see b***h in my shout with profile deleted
too much when many ask to leave love on this page

cant nbody judge me but GOD
i wasn't brought to lyfe to please u
im jst any ordinary girl that you will met
bein cool as f**k towards u

i run my lyfe nobody else
i choose who i wnt 2 b in it
i could careless if u dnt like me or not
cus its not lyke ma world revolves around u

livin ere minute of it..im not in a rush
im willing 2 wait to wat will come nxt and
who will come nxt time is priceless and
i dnt got anytime to waste it

Author's Note

grammar and spelling is on purpose. it syntax the gangsta rap

Reviews

[STEVEN]

wonderful...love the syntax...you are amazing

[STEVEN]

i know this one well...beautifully done and i know i am there with you and for you...writing is perfect...i love what you do and say...fabulous...