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prom night was the last overnight no more

here i sit nothing going on
sun shinning in the window
feel the warming light
fall across my bed

looking out my window
see some activity next door
neighbor moving around in the window
he does look this way sometimes

maybe he looks during some moments
the moments i am nude in my room
for i like the sun warming my body
so i never close the curtains

as i look out my window
there are leaves that
still have not fallen
wind move them alittle

nothing to do now
since i got fed up with fubar
wasted so much time there
now i have time to write

with nothing to do today
makes my mind wander
on the night before
was an interesting night

stayed out overnight
my man was excited
he had me all night
we slept face to face

that was the first time
first time to actually sleep
i always wondered why do they ask
who are you sleeping with

when i'm sleeping with
i do not actually sleep
but last night was a first
to sleep and to cuddle

now i barely remember
the chinese i had the night before
fried rice topped with lobster sauce
shrimp was fed to me by my bow

dinner was almost erotic
and i was warmed with wine
not so much i dont remember
the moments later mmm whoa

i do hint at the aroma of sex
found he was more hungry
than for chinese sauce
i felt center of attention

the meal did continue
and beyond when i was finished
ecstasy was felt beyond any meal
which we fell exhausted at most

as i'm cuddling in his arms
i slept with dreams of what
we were doing moments before
exhausted from gasping for air

it was my excitement
to wake up and fullfill
the dreams of night before
gasping again for my breath

Reviews

[STEVEN]

you already know how i feel...but so you know i actually read again...it is perfectly done and put together with such feeling that i believe you spent a wonderous night with your man...thanks for the privilege of reading and reviewing this beautiful piece...don't ever stop writing...no matter where you are...continue to write and i hope post here on WC...i love this and i love you...i will forever remember this beautiful poem...