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a single embrace is forever

dont let your memory fade of me
you will always be with me
but old memory fades fast
if all you remember is i love you

dont let your memory fade of me
memories are for you and me
I'll be lying here beside you
i will always love you

dont let your memory fade of me
old memories fade new ones are made
for always and forever memories
they are words you string so well

dont let your memory fade of me
Once again now One more time
new memories are made
of a single embrace forever
 

Reviews

[Dave]

Nice use of repetition to emphasize the idea of not letting the memory of you fade. I loved the topic!

[Bhabie]

not to forget my embrace

[RaindropsRoses93]

other than some punctuation issues it is a great poem. I tend to write without any caps because it is just more easy going. Most of the time I convert it but thats your own style. Keep going!

[STEVEN]

this is so wonderful...i can feel it within me...knowing you and loving you i can understand about all those memories made...you are a beautiful person and a fabulous writer...keep writing...i will keep reading...i love all that you write...

[Ron Reardon]

Very nice! You are so very talented!