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rhyme

rhythm

its not enough
that you know my pain
but you must feel my pain

not just once
that you know my pain
feel my pain i cannot rhyme

rhythm comes easily
but not rhyme
feel my pain

my goal has always been
feel my pain for i cannot rhyme
know my pain

i love you to feel my pain
not just that i cannot rhyme
just feel my pain

 

Reviews

[Bhabie]

rhythm is all you need

[STEVEN]

i feel the pain...i have felt the pain for some time now...beautifully written and put together so well...i love this...you are such a wonderful writer...keep writing and i know you will be the best one day...