12 [untitled]yearning for my perfume

you know i cant help but know
i see you watching me everywhere
i noticed you looking away when i look at you
seen you looking when i was practicing

you know i cant help but know
i show off more when i see you looking
strained my body in angles to show off my curves
see you peeking when i was doing makeup

embarrassed when you're watching me eat
please talk to me don't stand back
hear you sigh as i walk by
i know you think i'm unreachable

even i know i'm an eyecatcher
i do want you to talk to me
don't be embarrassed if i catch you
when you were looking at me

love the admiring looks you give
strained my body to get you to look more
i'm not so innocent as you think
know more about love than you think

i know the power i radiate
see the shine in your eyes
with each twist my feet on every step
my booty sway as p***y cat dolls sway

heard you breathing deeper the aroma
taking all the scent of my perfume
enticing you to breath deeper
the odor keeps me on your mind

Reviews

[Bhabie]

yearning for your perfume oh yes i do

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Our smell is our most strongest of all of our senses. And nothing pleases a man more, than the sweet aroma of a woman.

You got him hooked. Nice work!

[Roy L. Pickering Jr.]

There is no greater power on earth than that of a woman's sensuality, and when she's aware of this power there is no creature more dangerous, if not physically then certainly to the heart...and wallet. A siren's song is the ultimate Weapon of Mass Destruction. There is a Lolita-esque vibe to this piece coming from the point of view of the Lolita. Very sexy without crossing over to graphic. The narrator says she is not so innocent as the one who desires her thinks, which does not mean that in certain ways she may be more innocent than she realizes. After all, she talks of her body and hints at the promise of sex, but innocence means a lot more than mere virginity or abstinence. Nicely done.

[STEVEN]

reading this makes me feel that i am actually there and i can see you moving and dancing and just waiting for me to glance your way...ever so slightly...you are such a wonderful writer and the way you put this together i just feel i am there with you...keep writing my lovely friend...i am so amazed at how well you do write without having the coaching or training from a professional...you are fabulous...