Limerence

Limerence:

love has never made sense, 

unless…

unless matched, 

with a creator. 

Romance the idea of romance. 

Twenty first century knight, 

never could stand a chance,

against,

true, undisputed…love. 

Oh, now give to him,

Oh, now give to her,

and let go,

please let them go. 

For the cool of a kiss,

could never change our sin,

white as snow. 

All alone, maybe some where 

created, to be alone. 

Comforter, come forward,

for I am not alone.

You had a dream, but hearts and hearts,

in modern age, are not as they seem.

Romance, can only begin with God. 

-Eric Weick 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I see you counter what love is in the lines...
in the modern age of its intent to the word:
Limerence...
if you take out the other --- its not the love for another in this...
and you even go as to say both sexes...
leaving nothing out of the equation of things...
yet in the end clause as you did with the beginning...
says love is God --- first...in every meaning of the word...

[Eric Weick]

Thank you for your Review Glen.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Must agree this is an interesting perspective. i like the flow and the use of doubling on words.
nice write.

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Mad Englishman.

[Mercy Fae]

Very interesting idea you have depicted here. Very well written.

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Hikari Carlson.