Disappointment:

At the stage, 

at the desk, 

student weeps,

time to rest. 

Years wasted,

only to come back 

to a position she had,

held before. 

And the hope 

she had…

Back to a truth in soul,

she had lacked.

Disappointment: A plague

of Family.

Eyes are hers,

these eyes are his.

Thirty years a sham,

only failure left to live.

Disappointment: A sorrow of the heart. 

Here is a white flag, 

here, is, my, flag.

Giving up should only raise concern, 

when we speak of devils.

God only knows, 

i am more then concerned, 

when i think…. 

on, these, evils. 

Disappointment: Lineage has found true love. 

-By Eric Weick 

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Hi Eric,
Thank you for this entry to my little contest.
I cannot comment now as this would be unfair to other entries.
I shall return after the contest is over.
Best regards.
Clive.

[Mercy Fae]

Your stories and poems are amazing. I really enjoy your words.

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Hikari.

[Diana]

I really enjoyed the repetition of Disappointment throughout and the way it was offset by italics. Beautiful lyricism. Understated, yet profound... I really enjoyed this piece.

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Diana.