Experimental

Experimental

A Story by Chris Doucette
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Struck with brain cancer at the age of 5, Briar Johnson has little hope to live. Desperate to keep his daughter alive, her father makes a decision that will change his and his daughter's life forever.

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Prologue

The sounds of crying filled the air.

With the birth of Briar Johnson, nine months of sleepless nights and worry about what could be had very quickly been replaced by sleepless nights and worry about what is.

The moment William Johnson looked into the emerald green eyes of his daughter, the stern, uncompromising, veteran sheriff’s deputy found himself completely defenseless. William had found himself in the very unique position of being unable to control his emotions and they paraded down his cheek in a show that they had defeated him.

Five years later William and Beatrice’s tears flowed for a very different reason.

Briar was five when her mother began to notice the random eye movements and trouble that Briar had closing her eyes. The difficulty swallowing came next, followed quickly by the random and severe pain that would affect her arms and legs.

Doctors, performing a series of tests on Briar, determined that the tiny girl had developed Brain Stem Pontine Glioma. This rare form of pediatric brain cancer had affected Briar severely, but doctors were optimistic.

Doctors told the Johnson’s that the initial treatment for the tumors showed signs of being very successful and Briar would show improvement. The cause for concern, however, wasn’t the initial treatment. The reason for worry came with what happened after the first round. Pontine Glioma, the doctors explained, often recurred after initial treatments and its return was typically much more aggressive and frequently fatal.  What had become the Johnson’s very reason for life itself was now in very real danger of losing hers.

Desperate, William and Beatrice turned to the people that they felt could best help Briar….her aunt and uncle. Rebecca and Aaron Henning were world renowned scientists who had been researching developing treatments for cancer for years.

Running their own tests on Briar they came to the same conclusion and, to the utter heartbreak of the both families, had the same prognosis for Briar. Undeterred, the Henning’s believed that the best hope for Briar was the common treatment as it would provide them, and Briar, the greatest amount of time.

Under the supervision of the Henning’s, Briar went through the initial chemotherapy and radiation and within about six weeks, showed remarkable improvement. The pain in her legs and arms subsided, Briar regained control of her facial movements and, for a brief time, Briar was Briar again.

While in the hospital Briar was often joined by her cousin Reagan. Reagan and Briar had been inseparable from birth and ridiculous (at least to the girls) hospital rules weren’t going to stop them now. Reagan was a staple at the hospital where Briar received her treatments and refused to ever give up hope on Briar. The day Briar went home, Reagan walked alongside Briar’s wheelchair proudly.

Ten months later the first tumor emerged.

The aggressiveness of the tumors was astounding. Within weeks Briar had regressed and her parents were forced to watch their child suffer once again.

The end of Briar’s life was nearing on the night that Aaron approached William in the pediatric wing of Florida Hospital. The dimly lit room helped to hide the various machines that clicked and whirred about Briar.

Standing over the bed where Briar’s small body lay, Aaron explained “There’s a chance I could save her. It’s something that we’ve been experimenting with. We’ve developed a serum we call Infinity. The serum works…well, the cellular level testing we’ve done has shown hopeful results. The cancer cells are contained and then replaced quickly by new healthy cells. Once they’re contained, the serum helps the body to create new white blood cells that then destroy the cancer cells. It has potential, but we haven’t even tested it on animals yet. We have no idea how it could effect a human. For all we know it might not even work. It could kill her even quicker.”

Tears flowing from his eyes and his heartbreaking, “Do it.” was William’s only response.

One week later, and with Reagan by her side, Briar Johnson walked out of Florida Hospital.

 


EXPERIMENTAL

Chris Doucette

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

One

“That dress is perfect!” Reagan exclaimed as Briar twirled in front of the body length mirror. The pink ribbons dangled off her shoulder and danced in the air as she spun. The 11th grade Prom was less than a month away and she had finally found the perfect dress. A champagne colored, floor length Vera Wang that was fitted on the top and billowed out into delicate cascades of material that danced with her every movement.

 She thought she would never find it. After all, Reagan had found her dress months ago. Reagan never had a problem finding the perfect outfit for every situation. That was why she had finally broke down and asked Reagan for her help. If there was anyone who could find the right dress for prom it was Reagan.

The only problem now was convincing her dad to pay for it. Her dad was amazing, but completely in the dark when it came to fashion matters. Paying $1,500 for a dress was going to take a lot of extra schmoozing on her part. Maybe she would do an extra good job trimming the bushes or bring up the fact that she never got less than a B in school. EVER. The dress was perfect and this was the one time she had really wanted to stand out. She would just have to stand her ground.

Briar noticed the clock in the back corner of the store and realized that they were supposed to be home in thirty minutes. “Crap,” she thought to herself, “It’s almost time for dinner. Dad will freak if we’re not on time.” She took one last look in the mirror, sighed, and began walking back to the dressing room to transform herself back to normal Briar.

Passing by Reagan, she turned and asked in a quietly nervous tone, “This dress is pretty amazing, right?”

“It’s perfect!” Reagan flatly stated and smiled. “You are so beautiful. It really makes you look like a princess. A perfect dress for a perfect night.” As she said this Reagan giggled.

Briar blushed knowing that Regan was referring to the fact that Connor Thomas had finally asked her to prom. It had only taken him two years to work up the courage.

As she walked into the dressing room, she said “Stop, you’re going to jinx it. I’m still surprised he asked me to begin with.”

“Well, he is a boy and boys aren’t exactly the bravest things in the whole world. Especially when it comes to us girls. Besides, he should be nervous. You’re the best thing that could ever happen to him.’

Briar blushed slightly and for what seemed like the millionth time was reminded why Reagan epitomized what a best friend should be.  

Briar emerged from the dressing room wearing her standard jeans and ringer t-shirt, smirked and said “You’re darn right I am. Let’s get home before we both end up getting grounded and missing prom”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Two

The sun was setting as Briar and Reagan walked out of the Chevy Chase Pavilion. The crisp spring air, the Cherry Blossoms, the late sunsets and warmer weather all made DC in the spring seem even more remarkable.

The Johnson’s had moved here when Briar was nine years old. Briar’s dad had been a rising star in the CIA and had spent the majority of his time in Washington. William Johnson had grown tired of traveling back and forth to his Florida home and had finally ‘convinced their mom, Beatrice, to move full time to the Capitol.  

At first, Briar hated it. In Florida, she had had lots of outdoors space, she hardly ever had to wear long pants or even shoes, and (most importantly to Briar) she had friends and family near her back in Florida, foremost among them was Reagan. Leaving Florida, meant leaving Reagan. Briar Johnson and Reagan Henning had always loved each other’s company and had always been more like sisters than cousins and as it turned out moving 2,000 miles away didn’t change that.

To try and ease the transition, Beatrice had introduced Briar to all the wonderful sights and offerings that Washington D.C. had toll offer. Many an afternoon was spent wandering the expanse of grassy field known as The Mall. It was here that Briar had learned of the amazing history of the United States and had explored the history of the world through the vast Smithsonian Museums. Briar had found the amount of information overwhelming and thrilling.

With time, and a strong determination by her mother, Briar had come to love D.C.

Three years later, her mother had developed Pancreatic Cancer. The cancer had proven to be too strong of an opponent for her mother and after the passing of Beatrice Johnson, Briar had found a sanctuary in the city. The same museums and historical landmarks that had, before, offered an infinite amount of information and intrigue, now offered Briar a refuge from the grief that had filled her heart. The loss of Beatrice had shook Briar to her core. 

Two years later Reagan’s parents had been murdered and Briar found herself in the unique position of being able to understand the loss Reagan was feeling. Shortly after, Reagan came to live with the Johnson family permanently.

Briar hated the reasons why Reagan had come to live with the Johnsons, but loved having her there. Briar introduced Reagan to the same loves that her mother had shown her. The two girls, who had always been close, now found that they needed each other more than they knew. Their connection had transcended family.

“We’ve really got to go or we’re going to miss our train” Briar hated being late, a trait she had picked up from her father. Reagan, on the other hand, had a more relaxed view on time and never felt the need to rush.

“Relax, we have plenty of time”, Reagan responded as she calmly hit the close button on her cell phone. “I already text Uncle Bill and told him that we were on our way. He’s making spaghetti tonight! I love his spaghetti.”

As the girls entered the subway station they were greeted with the usual crowd of people returning from work or heading into DC. It seemed that no matter what time of the day, there was always a crowd. Figuring out the Metro system had been surprisingly easy and both Briar and Reagan had become accustomed to traveling this way.

As their train arrived, neither girl noticed the two Metro Officers observing them.

Finally arriving home, the girls walked through the front door to the incredible smell of garlic, butter, fresh tomatoes and pasta in the air. Spaghetti night had been a Monday night tradition in the Johnson household as long as Briar could remember. After her mom had passed, her dad had done everything he could to keep the household as normal as possible and, as weird as it seemed, Spaghetti Night had brought a small amount of comfort to both William and Briar. Reagan’s inclusion had only helped to make it that much more special.

“Hey, Dad!” Briar exclaimed walking over and kissing her dad on the cheek. William Johnson, kitchen towel hanging over his shoulder, was currently holding a pot the size of Texas full of boiling water and noodles over the sink and was preparing to pour the concoction into the colander waiting below.

“Hey, girls!” William responded, “Dinner is just about ready, grab some plates. How was your day?”

Reagan walked over to the cupboard and grabbed the dinner plates, “It was fine. Briar found a dress.”

Briar whirled her head to look at Reagan, scrunching her forehead and giving her a look that would stir ice into the bravest warriors heart. Reagan, in her defense, returned Briar’s shot with a sly smile and turned away.

William stopped pouring the steaming water and looked at Briar. “You did? Finally? That’s amazing, honey. Tell me about it.” William had somehow made it through the last two months during which Briar’s lack of a dress for prom had constituted a national emergency.

Briar hesitated, she had not planned on bringing up the finding of her prom dress this quickly and had not formulated her plan of attack. Briar had known that her dad would not be happy to hear about the price tag attached to finding her Holy Grail of dresses. “Ummm…well…it’s very simple. Kind of champagne colored. It’s floor length.” Briar measured every word to ensure maximum effectiveness. “Very classy…”

“She looks hot.” Reagan interrupted. William Johnson slowly turned his head toward Briar

“Reagan!” Briar felt the red rising in her face. This was not going as planned and Reagan was not helping.

“Well you do. About time you got out of those jeans and t-shirt. That’s all you ever wear.” Turning to look at William, Reagan raised her eyebrows and calmly stated, “Connor isn’t going to know what hit him.”

“Reagan, will you please shut up. Now, please!” Briar hissed through clenched teeth.

William regained his composure and resumed pouring the noodles into the strainer. “Well, I’m just glad you finally found a dress. I know you were worried about it.”

Pausing awkwardly, William looked at Reagan and stammered “She doesn’t look too hot, does she?”

“Dad!”

“Well, sweetheart, I am still your dad. This whole growing up thing isn’t exactly easy for me. I just want to know how much threatening I’m going to have to do to Connor.” William looked Reagan’s way and winked.

“Dad!” Briar had lost control of the situation and was in full panic mode.

“Don’t worry, Uncle Bill, I’m sure Connor will behave himself.” Reagan said with a sly smile. “He may be a dork, but Connor is a good guy.”

William said “I’m just teasing you honey. Finish telling me about your dress.”

Placing the plates on the table, Reagan smiled at Briar who had been left steaming. Briar could not believe this had gone so wrong. Not knowing what else to do, Briar turned and took three cups out of the cabinet and filled them with ice and sweet tea. As she took them to the table, “Well, like I was saying, it’s floor length and very simple, but elegant.  No rhinestones or sparkly gems. It…well…it’s me, just dressed up. It’s perfect Dad.”

William looked up to see his daughter’s face and knew that she was something special. Briar had always been comfortable with who she was and now was no different. Even in picking a prom dress, Briar had gone the opposite way of so many others. Choosing simple and elegant over flash and sparkle.

“It’s a little expensive though.” Briar quietly whispered as she turned to place them on the table.

“Well it is a prom dress, what is it $200?”

“Well, you’re kind of close. It’s really beautiful, Dad, and it is the perfect dress. You know I looked everywhere and haven’t been able to find one…”

“How much, Briar?”

“and this is a very important event and, you know, I have never gotten below a B in school and…”

“Briar. How much?”

“I don’t have any problem doing extra things around the house to help pay for…”

“It’s fifteen hundred dollars.” Reagan finally blurted.

Briar stopped dead in her tracks and stared at Reagan. “Why was Reagan so intent on sabotaging this?” was all she could think.

“Fifteen hundred dollars? As in, one thousand, five hundred dollars?” William asked.

Snapping back to life, Briar looked at her dad and said “Dad, this is the perfect dress. I don’t ask for anything and I want this night to be special. I know it’s a lot and I will do whatever I have to do to pay it back to you. Please let me get this dress.”

William took one look at his daughter’s face and knew that she would not be swayed. She was right. She didn’t ask for anything, she had always done great in school. She had been through a lot in her brief life. With one look, William knew that she deserved that dress.

“If it means that much to you, then we’ll figure out a way to make it happen...” William smiled at Briar.

Briar’s heart swelled and she hugged her dad. “Thank you, Dad!”

“You’re welcome sweetheart. Now…let’s eat.”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Three

 Life in high school usually involves young men and women bustling from one class to another, forging friendships that may last a lifetime. Woodrow Wilson High School was no different. Its healthy mix of cultures and backgrounds provided a healthy environment for a young women to build a foundation and Reagan took full advantage of it. Reagan (a member of virtually every club and participant of every sport at Woodrow Wilson) spent her day gathered with friends and had always enjoyed a large amount of popularity. Briar, while not as connected as Reagan, maintained her own busy schedule, participating in the Robotics Club, Photography Club and the debate club. No matter how busy the girls were, however, during their lunch time they had always made a point to catch up with each other.

“So, what time will you be done today?” Briar asked while taking a bite of her turkey sandwich.

“Young Women’s Project at three-thirty and then lacrosse until six. You?” Reagan responded crunching on her Sun Chips.

“Just Photo Club, but Connor asked if we could study for our Calc exam tomorrow, so I’ll just hang out here until you get done. Besides, I wanted you to go with me to pick up my dress. It should be ready today.”

“Absolutely, wouldn’t miss it for the world. I’ll meet you in the library as soon as practice is over. We might end early because we have a game Thursday and Coach doesn’t usually like to run us too hard before a game. You’re welcome, by the way for getting Uncle Bill to buy that dress.”

“You got him to buy the dress? How about you almost ruined the whole thing. I cannot believe you just blurted out like that. You have got to get that under control.”

“Relax. You’re always so worried about everything. It worked out, you got the dress and once Connor sees you, you will be able to knock him over with a feather. You deserve it. You’ve worked your tail off. Connor is a good guy and even though it took him forever, he really like you. You two are cute together.”

“I just feel like it’s soooo much money. It’s a lot…”

“There is no way that your dad would have bought it if he didn’t feel like you deserve it. Just enjoy it.”

With a sigh, Briar tucked the remaining bit of sandwich into her mouth and said “Ok, I have to go, I’ll see you after school. I’ll be in the library. Remember, we have the birthday dinner for Dad’s agency chief tonight. We have to leave on time! Love you.”

Reagan blew Briar a kiss and responded “Love you, too. Don’t study too hard with Connor.” Reagan winked at Briar.

Briar rolled her eyes, gathered her stuff and began walking towards her chemistry class. Having Reagan around had been the best possible thing that could have ever happened to Briar, but Reagan was such a different person than Briar. The loss of Reagans parents had undoubtedly been hard, but in the aftermath, Reagan had come out of it with an appreciation for life and a desire to try anything and everything that life had to offer. Reagan was determined to live life to its fullest.

In the aftermath of losing her mom, Briar had emerged feeling responsible for her father and making sure that she succeeded in a way that her mother would have wanted her to. College was right around the corner and she didn’t know how Connor fit into those plans. While Reagan might have been able to just go with the wind, Briar just couldn’t do that.

 

 

After school Connor was waiting in the library when Briar Arrived. Connor looked up from his algebra book as Briar heaved her back pack onto the table with a sigh. “Long day?” Connor asked.

“No, just that I want to look beautiful for prom and be perfect for you and that the one dress costs about as much as a kidney. That I have a ton of school work and college and…everything” is what Briar wanted to scream. Instead, she responded, “It will be ok, just tired.”

“We don’t have to study if you need to talk. I was looking over this stuff and I think I’ve got it. X minus Y equals Z. Yep, I got it.” Connor grinned.

“No, you need to get this done.”

“I promise…I got this, What’s up?”

Looking into Connor’s eyes, Briar was transported back into her brief history.

Connor wasn’t like a lot of other boys his age. He always seemed to genuinely care about Briar and was very sharp when it came to picking up on other people’s feelings. He had been that way since they had first met in the Fourth grade when Briar had moved to D.C. Briar had been really shy (as many Fourth grade girls are), and  Connor had been a really big goof ball.

She had a crush on him from the first moment she saw him. Something about his brownish unkempt hair and his toothy grin fascinated Briar.

Connor’s first words to Briar were “You’re different than everyone else. I like that.”

It had made Briar smile then and it had made her smile every time she had thought of it since.

After that, their friendship quickly blossomed. Connor had grown up in D.C. and was familiar with the city. He would add tidbits of information to the tours her Mom had given her. “The underside of D.C.” he called it.

The two had been friends for almost three years before she found out that Connor had had cancer when he was a child.

“I don’t even really remember any of it. I was only two. My mom had noticed a lump on my belly. She had it checked out and the doctors had given me a poor prognosis for surviving, but I’m still here, so I guess they don’t know everything.”

Connor’s confession had left her speechless and his simple acceptance of it left tears in her eyes. One year later, Connor had been the one to hold her and let her cry when her own mother had passed from cancer. That night, Connor had never said a word. He simply sat with Briar and held his arm around her until Reagan had arrived.

Briar couldn’t imagine how she could have made it so far without the two of them.

Snapping back to the present, Briar kissed Connor on the cheek, pulled out her math notebook and sat down. “We have work to do.”

 

Some time had passed as Briar and Connor brushed up on all of the expected items that would be on their upcoming end of the year Algebra test. So much so that Briar had completely lost track of what time it was, when Reagan came rushing in.

“Briar! Where have you been? I’ve been looking all over for you. We have got to go. We’re going to be late and you know if I’m saying we’re going to be late we are going to be really late. Hey Connor.”

“I’ve been here the whole time, where I told you I would be. What time is it?” Briar glanced at her watch. “Crap! We really are going to be late.” Rushing to gather up her belongings while glancing at Connor, she said, “Sorry, I have to rush off. Thanks for studying, you’re going to do great! I’ll talk to you later tonight.” Briar again, kissed him on the cheek and rushed off.

As Briar rushed off toward the exit of the library, Reagan stood by smiling and said “You two really do make a really cute couple.” She then leaned toward Connor and whispered “You better make sure your socks are pulled up on prom night, buster because…”

“REAGAN! NOW!” Briar yelled across the library, raising the heads of everyone in the library.

Reagan turned and walked away, winking at the still dumbstruck Connor sitting at the table.

 

 

Four

Picking up their pace the two girls hurriedly walked down Fort Dr and hooked a right onto Albemarle Street to the Tenleytown Station. Crossing the street, Briar noticed that traffic was surprisingly light for this time of the afternoon. Maybe catching the train wouldn’t be such a hassle.

Reaching the Metro station and hopping onto the escalators towards the stairs and turnstiles, Briar found that she had been correct. The usually bustling depot was surprisingly empty. A few random homeless men sat near the stairs, their palettes already set up for the night. Both girls hurriedly swiped their Metro cards and walked toward towards their gate.

With the lack of crowds making their walk through the depot much easier, the girls had made their train in plenty of time and with time to spare. Waiting for their train, the girls talked about school, Connor, prom and about nothing at all.

As they talked, two Metro Officers walked up to them. Both officers looked like they had been stuck in the subway for years. Their ancient appearance was startling and caught the girls by surprise.

A faint smell of body odor wafted into the air and, for the briefest of instances, Briar instinctively wrinkled her nose in response to the scent. The officers pale skin seemed to have actually resisted any attempts at adding any color and gave the appearance of having been bleached out many times. The older of the two had buttery, yellow teeth that stood in stark contrast to his pasty skin. The younger officer, was taller and seemed to have a permanently creepy grin across his face.

 “Ms. Johnson, Ms. Henning, we need you to come with us.” The yellow toothed officer slowly put his hand on Briar’s shoulder and began directing her towards the far end of the gate, while the other officer did the same to Reagan. Everything about the officers gave Briar and Reagan chills. Nothing about the two archaic officers seemed correct, but both girls had been around law enforcement enough to have respect for a badge and so they turned and followed the instructions given.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Five

“Officer 47 to Alpha, we got them. Officer 29 and I are heading back now.” Officer 47 spoke into the radio attached to his shoulder.

“What did we do?” Briar nervously asked. “We were just standing there? Where are we going?” Briar could feel her heart rate increasing with each step. This was crazy.

“Shut up, you’ve done enough.” was the only response Officer 47 gave as he tightened his grip on Briar’s shoulder.

Briar stole a glance at Reagan being escorted by Officer 29 and could clearly see that Reagan was panicked. Neither girl had ever been in trouble before and had no idea what they had done to earn this current escort. “Dad is going to kill us.” was the only thought in Briar’s head and it kept repeating like a mantra. “Surely this was some simple misunderstanding and the officers would soon realize their mistake.” She thought.

The door marked “Metro Transit Police Department” at the far end of the tunnel couldn’t have been less inconspicuous. Briar and Regan had passed this door hundreds of times while passing through the station and never given it a second thought. Now, however, as they approached, the door loomed ominously.

The uneasiness that the girls had been feeling now completely washed over them. This wasn’t right. Briar and Regan had done nothing.

As the lights in the room began to slowly kindle, Briar could see that the room was completely empty. A heavy staleness hung in the air and a thick layer of dust covered the walls. The room was decidedly colder than the rest of the station and the grayness of the room was overwhelmingly depressive. A single chair sitting in the corner looked as if it hadn’t been moved since the subway had first been built. The room was completely empty other than the chair and was definitely not a Police Station.

The apprehension that had turned to anxiety had completely turned to panic and it flooded over both Briar and Reagan.

Reagan found the courage to speak and shrugged the hand of the officer off her shoulder. “What’s going on here? You can’t just take us away. Who are you?”

Officer 47’s crooked smile was in full beam. Roughly he grabbed Reagan’s shoulder and thrust Reagan into the room at the same time that Officer 29 was roughly pushing Briar into the room. Briar stole a glance at Reagan and saw the same realization dawning on her cousin’s face.

 

 

Six

Officer 29 launched himself at the girls. This seemingly ancient man gracefully flew through the air. Before either girl could react, he was upon them. Flying feet first toward them at full speed, the entire weight of his force only being realized as the impact was made.

Reagan was the first to feel the impact, the bottom of this geriatric nightmare’s shoe making full impact with the side of her face. Her head snapped the opposite way as Officer 29’s foot found its mark. A split second later his other foot found its target squarely on Briar’s chin, snapping her head back. The impact of the kicks sent both girls flying violently through the air.

Through the tumbling caused by this nursing home reject, Briar saw that Reagan’s fate had been similar to hers. In the split second before Briar’s head found the concrete, she saw Reagan’s limp body flip through the air and squarely hit the wall, spine first. Briar landed with a sickening thud as her head hit the cold concrete. What was already a dimly lit room was rapidly becoming darker.

Briar struggled to lift her head and fight her way back from the darkness. Everything was blurry and spinning. She felt waves of nausea running through her. Turning her head she saw the two men rapidly closing in from Officer 29’s sneak attack. With an incredible effort, Briar struggled to bring herself to her hand and knees, every movement causing another wave of nausea.

“What the hell is going on?” was the only thought Briar had running through her mind. She cut her eyes toward Reagan who seemed to be moving, but was not doing much better than Briar. In the split second that she had taken her eyes off the men, they had closed in on the girls. The officers had split up, each one readying their attack for the girls.

Officer 47 reached Briar first and his combat boot covered foot found its mark squarely on her ribs. The wind from Briar’s lungs rushed out in a whoosh and the terror that flooded her mind drowned her in fear.

The impact of the kick lifted Briar off the ground and in the same motion Officer 47 grabbed the back of Briar’s head spinning her backwards. Catching a fistful of hair, he pulled back, spinning Briar’s body so that her chest and stomach were wide open for the man’s elbow, which drove her into the ground, leaving Briar a puddled heap of a human.

While Officer 47 had busied himself with Briar, Officer 29 had focused his attack on Reagan. Getting a running start, he slid across the concrete, aiming his boots directly at Reagan’s unprotected head. Regan had had only a split second to react to this assault.

It had not been enough time.

Officer 29’s boot firmly found its mark, violently spinning Reagan across the floor. Reagan slid to a stop just feet away from Briar’s body. Reagan’s hand lifelessly fell to the ground. Whatever fight she had for these men was rapidly fading. Through the tears flooding her eyes, she could see that Briar was faring no better.

Briar’s eyes had been flittering wildly, looking for any indication that Reagan was still alive. Finally, her eyes landed on Reagan. Through the throbbing in her head, she could hear Reagan's shallow, gurgled breathing next to her. Entering the subway had seemed like a lifetime ago. How had this happened?

From the corner of her vision she saw movement but could not immediately make out what it was. Taking forever for her eyes to focus, her eyes eventually showed her that it was Officer 47 moving towards the two girls.

“No big deal. Mission accomplished. Told you this wouldn’t be hard.” Officer 29 announced as he walked toward the two girls lying motionless on the floor.

The entirety of Briar’s body had exploded into pain and her brain flashed a lifetime of memories, one by one, visible clearly in the back of her consciousness.

“Shut up. Finish this up and let’s get the hell out of here.” Officer 47 replied as he turned to walk toward the door.

Officer 29 moved toward Briar, lifted his leg, and brought the full weight of his boot down on Briar’s head.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Seven

“Damn waste.” William Johnson stated in a deflated tone. A single tear slowly rolling down his cheek. “I can’t believe they’re gone.”

Aaron and Rebecca Henning had been respected parts of their small college community. Local scientists who had stayed in their community and brought their talents with them.  Their ground breaking study in genetics had the potential to solve the cancer riddle. The Henning’s had been able to single out the gene that caused the deadly transformations and had even been able to repair the damage that the cancer had done to their subjects cells. Their work had the potential to be the silver bullet needed to stop what had appeared to be an unstoppable monster. The Henning’s had been a mere month away from starting testing with human subjects.

Now, both of Reagan’s parents had been found dead. Murdered by, what appeared to be, a break in attempt gone wrong.

Five years after leaving Florida, William Johnson and his daughter had returned upon the news that William’s sister, Rebecca, and her husband, Aaron had been murdered. Aaron and Rebecca Henning’s body’s had been found the day before by their daughter. The police were investigating the murders as a break in that had gone wrong. The front door’s glass had been shattered and the inside of the house had been pillaged. The police chief had told William they were investigating but had no leads.

“All we know right now is that Reagan found them when she got home from school. Noticed the door was broken in. and ran over to the neighbor’s house. Neighbor called 911. We’ve been here ever since.” Chief Thompson reported. “There looks like there might be some jewelry missing, laptop and computer is gone. We’ve got detectives checking local pawn shops. We’re checking every angle, but so far we’ve got nothing. The whole town is in high alert, this kind of stuff doesn’t happen here.”

“They had no enemies, they had helped so many people. Who would do this to them?” William wondered. “They were good people. My family owes them everything”

“I’m sorry, Bill. Look, we’re working on it day and night. We’ll find whoever did this. Go take care of Reagan and get yourself some rest. We’ll be here for a while. If anything develops, I’ll contact you. ”

 

Briar and Reagan sat next to each other in the upstairs bedroom at their grandmother’s house. Reagan and Briar had had a bedroom there for as long as they could remember. The house was the same house that Briar’s dad and Rebecca’s mom had grown up in and after their grandmother passed away, Rebecca and William had kept the house and it had always been a home of sorts to Briar and Reagan.

Nothing had been said between the two girls since William and Briar’s arrival late last night. Reagan didn’t feel like talking and Briar didn’t push her. Their time had been spent mostly in silence, with the two girls sitting on the floor. There was nothing Briar could do to make this better. She knew that. However, that didn’t mean that Reagan had to be alone. Reagan had been there for Briar and she was determined to do the same for Reagan.  

Seven years earlier, Aaron and Rebecca had supervised Briar’s treatment and had made sure she had the best doctor’s available, but the person most responsible for getting Briar through the ordeal had been Reagan. When Briar’s own trials had begun, Reagan had informed her parents that she would not be leaving Briar’s side and she didn’t. Through every chemo treatment, blood transfusion and sleepless night, Reagan had been by her cousin’s side. Reagan’s laugh and determination had been a leaning post for Briar and the day that the doctor told Briar that there were no traces of the cancer left in her body, Reagan had been standing proudly by Briar’s side. Reagan had taken a small measure of responsibility and a huge amount of pride in Briar’s success.

Now Reagan found herself in a horrible nightmare. Reagan’s life had been changed for the worse and she would never be the same. There wouldn’t be a miraculous recovery or a happy ending. Reagan would live with what she saw for the rest of her life. Briar silently vowed to stand by Reagan for however long it took.

With no other family to care for her, Reagan would come live with the Johnson’s now. Briar wish she felt better about it.

“What am I going to do, Briar? I’m alone now” The words came out in a hushed tone. Briar’s heart broke at hearing Reagan’s voice. Before she could stop them, tears began streaming from Briar’s eyes. How do you answer a question like that? She reached across the bed and hugged Reagan, not knowing what else to do.

“I don’t know,” Briar somehow managed to get out, “I don’t know. I do know that you’re not alone though. I’ll never leave you alone.”

The words hung in the air as Reagan began silently weeping into Briar’s shoulder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Eight

Death was a friend to Officer 47. Between him and Officer 29, they had accelerated the life span of more people than he could even remember. He was a death bringer and there were not many people alive that would be able to tell you the pair even existed.

The duo had become so good at what they did, that they had often become bored with the ease with which they were able to conquer their targets. The gruesome torture that they had imparted on many unfortunate enough to find themselves assigned to the pair had given them a sick sense of joy and relief of boredom from their everyday. After tiring of their prey, they would finally extinguish their light.

This time was different though. Neither could remember ever having targets this young and in the bottom of their soul, buried underneath the irrational wildness and the cracked reality the slightest twinge of decency had drove both men to end this assignment quickly and move on. Why Murko had sent them to take are of these two teenage girls, Officer 47 didn’t now. He wasn’t paid to know. He was paid to do as he was told and he was told that death had needed to visit these two.

Officer 29’s foot dropped with a viciousness that would quickly end the uneven struggle.

Briar had seen the boot coming. Defenselessly laying in a crumpled heap, battered by the viciousness of the attack, she had watched the tread of Officer 29’s boot speeding toward her face. She had closed her eyes in an attempt to brace for the coming impact and Briar’s last thought had been “I love you Dad.”

Then there was a luminosity that quickly rose in its intensity.  A brilliant white light that dammed behind her eyes and then released like a flood. Briar could feel the light spread through her body and as it flowed through her, the pain left her body and was replaced by a warmth that she had never felt before. Every cell of her body seemed to release the agony, that just moments before, had seen inescapable. In an instant the pain was gone.

The spreading light and warmth finally released in a brilliant, fierce explosion that left Briar replenished. “So this is what death is like…” was her next thought. Briar felt the force of the light escaping through every pore of her body and the peacefulness that followed Briar was comforting. Her thoughts were interrupted by an anguished, sorrowful scream. “What the heck is that?”

Twenty-five feet away Officer 29 crashed against the concrete wall enclosing the room with a sickening thud as a rush of air left his lungs.

Then the light faded and as the brilliance swiftly diminished, Briar was slapped with the reality that she wasn’t experiencing death. The cold of the concrete floor stung her face and Briar could feel the firmness of the floor as she pushed herself up right and slowly raised her head to see Officer 29 across the room laying in a motionless heap. Officer 47 stood with his arms up in a defensive position struggling to comprehend what had just happened. He looked at Briar befuddled and Briar returned his look with an equal amount of confusion

“What was that?” Briar’s bewildered thoughts came out of her mouth with no chance for her to stop them. Groggily, Briar brought herself up to her hands and knees. “Reagan! Where’s Reagan?” Briar turned her head to see Reagan also bringing herself up to a crouching position. Tears began to brim in Briar’s eyes. Reagan had somehow survived the attack and was already collecting herself.

For her part, Briar had rarely felt better, which had served to only confuse her even more. She remembered the fight and the blows that she had sustained. The viciousness with which these two men had attacked her and Reagan just moments earlier. She remembered the taste of blood filling her mouth and nose, the nauseating, snapping sounds her ribs had made as Officer 47 had systematically destroyed her. Briar clearly remembered the gush of blood that made breathing difficult.

But it was all gone now. The gurgling sound her lungs had been making, the scratches on her face, the stabbing pain that had filled her chest. All of it, gone.

The sensation had left Briar shell shocked and she began to gingerly lift herself off the floor and raise herself to her feet.

Across the floor, his mind furiously trying to decipher what had just happened, Officer 47’s mind raced to decide on a course of action. He had delivered death to much more durable opponents with much less severe attacks. These girls shouldn’t be breathing, much less slowly rising to their feet.

Officer 47 didn’t know what had happened, but he did know that the two girls weren’t dead and death had been what the assignment had called for.

Finally making a decision Officer 47 rushed at Briar, who appeared to be the more dangerous threat. Bringing the full bulk of his muscular form quickly up to full speed, he unsheathed the Mark II blade he carried at his side in the same motion.

This needed to end. They had already been here too long. Quickly covering the distance between himself and Briar, Officer 47 raised his hand slightly to deliver a death blow to Briar, the blade sliding towards her. Officer 47’s heartbeat slowed to a soft thump in his ears as he felt the end of this match coming.

Briar felt helpless as she saw the menacing man making his way towards her. Seeing the wildness in his eyes and knowing the attack was imminent, Briar raised her hands in a futile attempt to deflect the attack.

Mere inches now separated the knife from Briar, when Officer 47 suddenly and wildly changed his course. The abruptness of Officer 47’s direction change caused the bulky man to wildly rock and wobble unsteadily until the rocking finally took the man off of his feet. Sliding across the floor like a felled rhino, Officer 47 quickly gathered himself back up and spun to face the girls. Turning he found his target still on her knees, hands still up preparing for his knife. Scanning the scene in front of him he immediately noticed there was only one girl where there had previously been two.

A swift kick from Reagan to Officer 47’s wrist dislodged the knife from his hand and caused the long combat blade to slide across the floor. Looking up to identify this assailant, Officer 47 immediately recognized the target.

Reagan did not want to give her opponent a chance to recover and immediately and fiercely swung her leg at the man’s face. Her foot landing squarely on Officer 47’s chin, sending the man sprawling away from her.

Quickly gathering himself up, Officer 47 launched a counter attack on Reagan, swinging his large fist wildly at her. Reagan dropped her body down dodging the attack and immediately sprung back up delivering another kick, this time to the back of the man’s head, causing Officer 47 to flail head first into the wall.

Sluggishly Officer 47 stood up. “I was going to kill you quickly, you little b***h. Now…now I’m going to make you feel every bit of your death.” Officer 47’s deliberate steps toward Reagan displayed how predator like Officer 47 really was.

Reagan launched herself at the man jumping to give her punch an extra impact.

Officer 47 easily deflected Reagan’s punch and grabbed the girl by her arm and brought her into his mighty grip and squeezed.

AARRGGHH” was the only sound Reagan could muster as Officer 47 constricted his arms like a python around her body slowly driving the breath out her. With each miniature breath Reagan took, Officer 47 would ratchet his arms tighter, leaving less and less room in her lungs.

Watching in horror, Briar saw Reagan slowly being crushed by the man’s massive arms. The wild range of feelings in her mind, made it difficult to think. Briar began to slowly walk towards the two combatants. As she slowly and steadily walked to wards the two, she felt her anger building. The light that had appeared and disappeared just as quickly, began to return.

Briar’s steps quickened as her anger built. “Who the hell were these guys? Why would they attack us? Why are they trying to kill us?” With each thought Briar’s anger built up, her body felt like a dam holding back a raging river.

No!” Briar yelled in a blind rage. The emotions all culminating in a single word. Finally releasing the rage, the energy surged from Briar in a flood towards her attacker. The air around Briar stretched and expanded, appearing to bend swirling around her clenched fists and gathering into an increasingly dense mass. The air, collapsing into a thick state, began to ignite, glowing a bright white and swirling faster and faster.

Finally exploding Briar’s arm launched from her side, sending the mass across the space and squarely into the back of their attacker. The impact immediately caused him to release his grip and stagger sideways. Having been dropped, oxygen flooded into Regan’s lungs as she gasped for air and crawled away from Officer 47.

Turning to face this new threat, Officer 47 saw Briar standing with a tear streaked face, arms still raised towards him.

Officer 47 took one step toward Briar and raised himself up to his full height before collapsing to his knees and falling like a great tree in the forest. The impact of his body sending up a cloud of dust as he hit the concrete.

Realizing the threat had passed, Briar looked at her hands with a sense of fear. “How did I do that?” she thought, then for the millionth time that evening she asked herself “What is going on?” Briar lowered her hands, slowly at first, then quickly as she saw Reagan sitting against the wall and recovering.

Quickly running over to Reagan, Briar threw her arms around her and squeezed a flood of tears being released by both girls.

“Reagan, I’m so sorry. Are you ok?”

Slowly beginning to push her way up, Regan, trying to muster up some sort of sarcasm, replied “Never been better.”

Surveying the scene, Reagan grabbed Briar’s hand and began to lead her out the door. “We need to go.”

Pulling her arm away from Reagan, Briar held her ground. “Did you see what happened? I launched…” searching for words that would describe what had just happened, Briar finally settled on, “…something from my hands. Not to mention that I don’t have any injuries. Those guys beat the crap out of us, but I feel fine. They attacked you and you got back up and fought that guy. Which, by the way, when did you learn to fight?” With each word she spoke, Briar escalated toward a nervous breakdown. The full weight of the last few minutes beginning to settle heavily.

“What happened to my hands, who are these guys, why aren’t we hurt…what happened here?” The words escaped Briar in one breath as her hands shook with adrenaline.

“Briar, I know there are a lot of questions here, but we need to get out of here.” Reagan walked over to her backpack and pulled out her cell phone. Hitting a single button she held the phone to her ear and said, “We have a situation. We’re heading home.” With that she clicked the button again and placed the phone in her back pocket.

Briar’s face displayed the range of emotions that were inundating her. “A situation? We have a situation? That’s what you call this? Who was that?”

“Briar we have to go. It’s not safe here. Honey, I know you’re scared and have a lot of questions and I have a lot to tell you, but we need to leave. Now.”

Reagan held her hand out and waited for Briar to take it.

Briar’s head was spinning. So much had just happened, so much that she couldn’t even begin to process it yet. Even with everything that had happened she knew that Reagan was someone she could trust. She took her hand and smiled through tears creeping out of her eyes.

Reagan accepted her hand and squeezed it, tears forming in her eyes as well.

Reagan opened the door to the Metro station to find it still empty. Reagan took a second to look around, then pulled Briar through the door and up the escalator to the street above. 

© 2014 Chris Doucette


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A magic serum of experimentalness should have a likewise name, it seems to me; like MB-003 (one of the early versions of the ZMapp Ebola experimental treatment for example) or some such alpha-numeric nonsense.

Not a lot of time spent with any character. What's the point of view?

I feel like Chapters 1 and 2 are actually one chapter cut in half. Might be because the end of Chapter 1 has no hook. Not that every chapter needs a 'hook'...but it helps, especially earlier in the book. It's like your cutting to a commercial break. It might also be because...take away the break, and they read as one scene.

I like the 'cold opening' for Chapter 1, but why wait until Chapter 2 to explain where the mother is, and why Reagan is back in every day life? There was confusion until it was explained in Chapter 2. Much confusion. Came off as clumsy storytelling.

When you do internal dialogue for a character, maybe go with italics instead of quotation marks. That way the reader knows this is active internal dialouge, and no chance of mistaking it for actual dialogue.

I'll stop at the end of Chapter 2 for right now. I think you hinted at the plot hook in having the Metro cops look at her, and having her dad be a rising star in the intell community. I think. It might be helpful to the interest level to foreshadow a bit more, even if it's only a LITTLE bit more.

Hope that helps!

Briar comes off as one square, impossibly good, kid. Hope that was your goal! She says "You're darn right..." and I just don't know a teenage girl that says that, without having little sarcasm thrown into it. Not impossible, just seemed out of character. But it's your character.

While I stopped after Chapter 2, I did notice a line from Chapter 3 that also hit the 'saywhat?' alarm: "...young men and women bustling from one class to another." Unless the narrator/POV is a middle aged adult, I'd change that to 'boys and girls' or 'guys and girls.' Just so it doesn't look like a paint by number painting in the Louvre.

I didn't realize which work you were referring to in your forum post, so I accidentally read the Cyclist one first. Props for having the only Unicycle cop chase I've ever seen/read. Fun read!

Most important part? It wasn't a hard read when I ignored the 50's lingo and confusing Reagan bit. Good work, overall! Lemme know if you want more reviewed from me. Hope I didn't come off as too harsh!

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