Captivated

I am without words when I think of my Father. I tried to capture a small portion of the magnificence & what I feel when I am with Him,...in His presence.

     

 

Emblazoned by the heart of

 

My Father

 

Captivated by heaven’s tender touch

Every pore of my being

Imbued with who He is

 

 

Mind blowing

 

Mind boggling

 

 

Knowing I am one of many

In the sea of His children

 

 

Who am I that He should care?

 

Who am I that He should touch

 

     my heart?

 

 

Moving me melodiously

Meticulously

 

 

Playing me like Heaven’s Violin

 

Causing my heart to sing a

Harmonious heavenly tune

Of yearning

 

 

For more of Him

 

 

Moving me

Wooing me

Encapsulating me

 

Like a chess piece

On the board of life

 

 

Totally submitted to

  

His Will

               His Purpose

               His Plan

 

 

Nothing compares

To the articulate God that He is

 

So Electrifying

       Tantalizing

          Moving

                        Spectacular

 

 

A brilliant display of fireworks

 

    Effervescent

        Dazzling

Enrapturing me in ecstasy

 

 

Eternal bliss like no other

In the presence of My Almighty King

The one who loves me

The one who bids me come

 

And never turns me away

 

 Nothing compares to the incredible euphoria

Of touching heaven & holding His hand

      His heart…

 

 

Adoring Him

      Loving Him,

 

 

Yearning to be with Him

     To touch Him

 

 

Even just for a moment

 

 

To feel my head upon His chest

 

To hear the beat of His heart

To be drawn close to the King

To hear His cries for humanity

 

 

His groaning

      His moaning

             His longing

 

 

For in that moment of time

 

 

I am enthralled by the

River of Life He produces

Within me

 

 

When that New Wine

 

Touches my lips

I am

 

Refreshed

     Restored

                Transformed

 

By the beauty of His Love

 

 

The waves of His Spirit

 

Rolling over me

AND

Producing a mellifluous tune

Within my soul

 

 

Making me crave His presence more and more

Making me want to search Him out

And press in to that heavenly place

That perfect place

       Where He is

 

 

 

He's Calling...

 

 

Author's Note

There is an intrinsic beauty in free flow poetry...I know some of you don't care for it. That's quite alright.
Feel free to review accordingly.

Reviews

[None]

A standing ovation!! What beauty, I can feel His energy through your words. I know this is how I feel inside through loving Him. Carole, this is so truly beautiful and you have really expressed so well the feeling only Our Father can give us in our hearts! This is so true and refreshing and by reading this, I could filter out all the junk today and replace it with exhilarating exuberance! Keep sharing you gifts, they are astounding. He is putting it on your heart to share because He knows you can do so quite beautifully!

[Amanda]

what a beautiful piece....it flows wonderfully and is a very good tribute to our lord.

an excellent job!

Always,

Amanda

[forfila]

Wow!,, I dare not say much more than I will lovingly add this to my favs, such a beautiful write of devotion. I am in awe

Love
Me

[Fran Marie]

Absolutely Beautiful!!! ~ a lovely flowing piece so inspiring in verse~THanks for sharing
this grand piece of poetry~Fran Marie

[D. L. Hutson]

Beautifully written! I feel like i'm right there with you wanting the same thing. I love that part about being played on heaven's violin. What can I say? It's WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Absolutely exquisite. Your faith is masterfully detailed and beautifully portrayed here. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[S.E. Conway]

i love how it flows, and the different sacing used to emphicize your point. very well done!

[Carrie Montgomery]

I love it, love it, LOVE IT! This is beautiful. I am sure it may help Him reach to a few hearts and perhaps even save a few more souls. The free-flow style is perfect for such an over-flowing of emotion. Truly inspiring, Carole.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

What can I say Carole!

Your composition reflects an impassioned exaltation and gratitude to the blessings He has bestowed upon your life. The captivation of your heart, through the encapsulation of His unconditional love, has produced an inspirational, poetic and expressive work of praise.

There's an 'Amen' there somewhere!

God's Blessing
Phillozofee

[Jason]

Very uplifting if I may say so. Your faith rings through and true! I am not really religious, more spiritual and open to many interpretations, however, I do feel very much move and inspired!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I always love free flow poetry and this poem Carole has been so beautifully written!
It gives a very great feel to the reader while reading it.

Yet this entire piece with each and every line is so beautiful but still I've few lines which are my favorite in it, like-

'Playing me like Heaven's Violin"
And,

"Eternal bliss like no other
In the presence of My Almighty King"- Beautiful simile and I loved it!!

Really amazing write! :)