Captivated

I am without words when I think of my Father. I tried to capture a small portion of the magnificence & what I feel when I am with Him,...in His presence.

     

 

Emblazoned by the heart of

 

My Father

 

Captivated by heaven’s tender touch

Every pore of my being

Imbued with who He is

 

 

Mind blowing

 

Mind boggling

 

 

Knowing I am one of many

In the sea of His children

 

 

Who am I that He should care?

 

Who am I that He should touch

 

     my heart?

 

 

Moving me melodiously

Meticulously

 

 

Playing me like Heaven’s Violin

 

Causing my heart to sing a

Harmonious heavenly tune

Of yearning

 

 

For more of Him

 

 

Moving me

Wooing me

Encapsulating me

 

Like a chess piece

On the board of life

 

 

Totally submitted to

  

His Will

               His Purpose

               His Plan

 

 

Nothing compares

To the articulate God that He is

 

So Electrifying

       Tantalizing

          Moving

                        Spectacular

 

 

A brilliant display of fireworks

 

    Effervescent

        Dazzling

Enrapturing me in ecstasy

 

 

Eternal bliss like no other

In the presence of My Almighty King

The one who loves me

The one who bids me come

 

And never turns me away

 

 Nothing compares to the incredible euphoria

Of touching heaven & holding His hand

      His heart…

 

 

Adoring Him

      Loving Him,

 

 

Yearning to be with Him

     To touch Him

 

 

Even just for a moment

 

 

To feel my head upon His chest

 

To hear the beat of His heart

To be drawn close to the King

To hear His cries for humanity

 

 

His groaning

      His moaning

             His longing

 

 

For in that moment of time

 

 

I am enthralled by the

River of Life He produces

Within me

 

 

When that New Wine

 

Touches my lips

I am

 

Refreshed

     Restored

                Transformed

 

By the beauty of His Love

 

 

The waves of His Spirit

 

Rolling over me

AND

Producing a mellifluous tune

Within my soul

 

 

Making me crave His presence more and more

Making me want to search Him out

And press in to that heavenly place

That perfect place

       Where He is

 

 

 

He's Calling...

 

 

Author's Note

There is an intrinsic beauty in free flow poetry...I know some of you don't care for it. That's quite alright.
Feel free to review accordingly.

Reviews

[None]

A standing ovation!! What beauty, I can feel His energy through your words. I know this is how I feel inside through loving Him. Carole, this is so truly beautiful and you have really expressed so well the feeling only Our Father can give us in our hearts! This is so true and refreshing and by reading this, I could filter out all the junk today and replace it with exhilarating exuberance! Keep sharing you gifts, they are astounding. He is putting it on your heart to share because He knows you can do so quite beautifully!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This poem is amazingly beautiful and touching to the soul. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Brenda Sue]

So very well written. So full of love and emotions. Beautifully penned.

[James K. Blaylock]

Amen, this is truly a wondrous piece. It is greatly overflowing with the spirit of love.

jkb

[J. Hampton]

This has all the effervessance of a complete relationship with God

the strength of the words...the colors...the movement and energy
of the ....very confidance and homage
is....outstanding

luv it

Blesssssssssssss

This is beautiful! Written with such elegance! I could never put in words how I feel but you did a wonderful job! Great poem!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was beautiful, truly beautiful. Anyone who asks...why would God even bother with me?, is definitely on God's to do list. Anyone who says...God needs to do this or that, is definitely on God's waiting list. Pride does not bring us before the throne, but humility. Excellent write!

[Dezaraye]

This is not like your usual style, but I really like the free flowing thoughts here. I think that it's mor profound that way. The one word lines really add a great depth to the piece overall.

[Rylan Batten]

this is a really great tribute...I like how you use the different fonts and colors to keep the tone of the poem light-hearted, while the words are deep and devoted. Great piece, I like it a lot. Thanks for posting

[Valentine]

I could hear the old hymn.."Who Am I " while I read this..who am I that a King would live and die for..who am I to say not Thine word mine Lord. Just thinking of Him coming down to earth to saave His children is mind boggling to me..I pray all will hear that still small voice and answer His call!! Nice, thank you for asking me to read this...God bless..Valentine

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Free flow poetry is a beautiful thing. I think it lets one express ideas and thoughts rather than just trying to do some sort of formulated thing (not that it's a bad thing). This piece in particular is amazing. Truly you feel the love of God! It is very refreshing to see people write of the beauty that is God's love. The reader can feel your passion when reading this poem, it builds and builds. Thanks for sharing your take on this wonderful thing that is the love of the Heavenly Father.