The diary of a helpless heart.

People come and go.

Your fair figure reflects in one dewdrop on the grass,
this is how I know it will last.
Like the flowers in spring, filling the once darkened earth-
you supply my soul where emptiness once reigned.
Feeding me emotion not once before gained.

So I move on, to the polarity of clarity-
stretched to heaven on a string.
Questioning a century of risen morals,
while skillfully counting my sorrows...

It is only you I long for,
only the blue from your eyes, uplifting my senses-
as if stealing my entirety,
while the piercing breathes aggravate my mind.

So blinded by feeling,
I walk as the wind does.
Hovering over wandering wonder.
Dressing in transparent emotion...
yearning, for an inspeparable glimpse.

There your fair figure reflects once more-
in a freshly fallen snowflake.
Only to be drained by change.

This is how I know you will go.
This is how i know you will stay.
This is how I know what's to come.
For everything is destined to change.

 

 

 

Reviews

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Dude this is awesome.

The intense feelings written for the lady at hand if real or not seem very real. Being able to catch such a burning emotion felt by so many people is an art. Continue to bless it...

Check out some grammar though; aggravate for instance :)

Keep on keeping on ;)

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wow!!! this is one of the best poems I've read on here. This is Amazing. Thank you very much!!!

[KellieJeanne]

wow, this is beautiful
for some reason
"I walk as the wind does." just gave me this amazing image and gave me chills, this is absolutely lovely.

[Emily B]

wonderful work, thanks for inviting me to it