little red balloon

little red balloon

A Poem by Autumn's Child
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On Valentine's Day, I watched a red balloon float upwards until it disappeared into the clouds. I wondered if we were to send valentines to God, would he get them? And this haiku came to me.

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little red balloon

floating up into the sky

sending love to god

© 2012 Autumn's Child


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I just wrote a poem called Red Balloon, ironic. Love this haiku. It has a similar message to the piece I wrote, take a peek and read it thru... either way kudos on this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


wonderful. luv this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


how wonderful to see you here again!

such a beautiful thought as always

hope you stick around, you've been sorely missed!

:)


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 13, 2010
Last Updated on August 3, 2012
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Autumn's Child
Autumn's Child

Petaluma, CA



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The majority of this poetry is now in a book titled "Everything I Am Not Saying". Find it here ----> amzn.to/16TZB3q For more of my writing, visit crissilangwell.com Thank you for the years .. more..

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