Bag of Saris

Bag of Saris

A Poem by Autumn's Child
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My beautiful bag has seen better days......

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My bag of saris,

ripped beyond hope, has become

my bag of sorries.

© 2008 Autumn's Child


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Maybe it's a sign to get rid of the sorrows you've been carrying around for too long?

I know, use a, Glad Bag as a purse, their sturdy, waterproof, and economical to boot.
Heck, you can get a whole box of them for just a few bucks. Oh, and they come in
different sizes too, so say you've got a hot date and need a shiek little number, hey,
just whip out the sandwich size, and it's off to the races WooHoo! They even have
some with a zipper now, for when you just got to get to that, um, you know, personal item,
fast, quick, and in a hurry! Although, they are see through, so people would, always know your
business, but hey, they probably already do anyway, so what the heck.

Yep, stop being sari, and start being, Glad.

Great Poem, I'm glad I read it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is cute... you've translated your bag into words. Your bag has become the haiku and the haiku has become your bag. This it the kind of haiku that you read several times... once simply isn't enough. A fine exhibit... thanks for sharing... haha... feels like show and tell.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe it's a sign to get rid of the sorrows you've been carrying around for too long?

I know, use a, Glad Bag as a purse, their sturdy, waterproof, and economical to boot.
Heck, you can get a whole box of them for just a few bucks. Oh, and they come in
different sizes too, so say you've got a hot date and need a shiek little number, hey,
just whip out the sandwich size, and it's off to the races WooHoo! They even have
some with a zipper now, for when you just got to get to that, um, you know, personal item,
fast, quick, and in a hurry! Although, they are see through, so people would, always know your
business, but hey, they probably already do anyway, so what the heck.

Yep, stop being sari, and start being, Glad.

Great Poem, I'm glad I read it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 2, 2008

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Autumn's Child
Autumn's Child

Petaluma, CA



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The majority of this poetry is now in a book titled "Everything I Am Not Saying". Find it here ----> amzn.to/16TZB3q For more of my writing, visit crissilangwell.com Thank you for the years .. more..

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