Stairway Kiss

Remembering our 

secret kiss by the stairway

keeps my heart beating.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Oh, how very passionate! I like this. Great write. Very visual!

[Antonio Valentino]

Now when you say, rembering, your, secret kiss.
Was this fellah, kissing himself?
I guess that would want to be kept a secret.

I know, I know, it was, our, secret kiss, as in, you and he, I get it, I get it.

The poem, not the kiss.

[Murphy]

Wow! Haiku par excellence. This piece prepares the palate and leaves the reader wondering what the recipient of such a fine revelation would (or could, for that matter) be able to say in response. This Haiku creates a beautiful moment of silence; it seals the envelope, if you will, and completes the moment. A very soft, yet powerful expression... very inspiring... all in three lines... great job!