Guardian

Water pulls, and water blows

the rocks with foam as it erodes

the base of houses built on stone

for little ones evading snow.

Winter comes, and winter slows

its advance, cause winter knows

that a slow charge will surely mow

the little ones evading snow.

Wind, it pulls and wind, it blows

a giant rock, a cliff you know,

for the only haven with face shown

guards little ones evading snow.

Reviews

[Skib]

I liked this a lot. The repetition of evading the snow was particularly powerful and possible poignant? Just my interpretation :) Very good

[Carlton B. Reid III]

Yes, I repeated evading snow, as like the title suggests, we're all have something we hide from or struggle with and need a rock or a guardian to protect us.

Thanks for the comment.
-Carlton

[Skib]

Very true indeed :) You're more than welcome

[Wild Rose]

Winters tale
Wind and rain Floods: Deep snow: frost

[Carlton B. Reid III]

I'm not sure what you meant. Could you elaborate?
--Carlton

[Wild Rose]

We get all of these in winter

[Wild Rose]

we were blocked in for almost a week > roads blocked by snow< Stranded vehicles or crashes

[Carlton B. Reid III]

Ah, okay, sorry to hear that. I used to live in Oklahoma, and they surprisingly get a lot of snow too.