Loneliness Lives

Loneliness Lives

A Poem by Cbklyn4u
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Admist all the things that we want in life.. some things don't need money

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 Loneliness Lives
 
Loneliness is alive in each and everywhere
Observe your surroundings to see
It’s on the faces of those who are in despair
Even those who appear so glee
 
Solitude existing in this rustling world
Alone, needing passion and trust
Awaiting for their emptiness to unfurl
Connection for all is a must
 
    Interaction, wanting and need                              
With humanity and nature to touch
Look around, smile, such a simple deed
It’s appreciated oh so much
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

© 2009 Cbklyn4u


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this write used the simplest of words to bring forth the most avoided question .. are we lonely ? yes most of us are .. and it's amazing as to how a simple smile can bring about a change .. the rhyme scheme made the poem flow subtly . glad to have read this ! keep writing mam :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's true, very true. I can relate it.

Keep exercising your talent.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Cbklyn4u
Cbklyn4u

Brooklyn, NY



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I am a former NYC Teacher for over 24 years, mother of two daughters and grand to five beautiful children. I always wrote whenever I had the chance, and find that to be my escape when I feel overwhe.. more..

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