Feeling of Blunder

Feeling of Blunder

A Poem by Cbklyn4u
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When a partner feels something

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Between what is going on with us two
lies a part of me that wonders...
Do I get respect as I do you?
Why do I have this feeling of blunder?
 
Are you the sneaky kind,  that plays the saint?
With all the messaging, writing and calling?
Is you love compared to mine just a bit of faint?
Do you have an open heart,  or is mines just falling?
 
Would you be man enough to say if you were,
not happy with what we are?
Or would you rather have it all, if preferred?
Is my feeling just only bizarre?
 
My instincts are usually very on cue,
when I feel like something is not just right.
This is nothing that is all but so new,
I have seen this kind of sight
 
My heart I open like a book,
nothing sheer is there to hide.
But,  now and then when I take a look
I wonder,  is it with you that I can confide?
 
And know that in return I shall get the same,
Respect and total honesty.
For if not,  you can go back the way you came
Just keep on, and let me be.

© 2008 Cbklyn4u


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Added on June 19, 2008

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Cbklyn4u
Cbklyn4u

Brooklyn, NY



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I am a former NYC Teacher for over 24 years, mother of two daughters and grand to five beautiful children. I always wrote whenever I had the chance, and find that to be my escape when I feel overwhe.. more..

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