Totalitarian Zoo

Totalitarian Zoo

A Poem by R(EVOLUTION)

Through clenched teeth
You shall enjoy artificial paradises
Building God's kingdom
Through the barrel of gun.
Liberty and justice only in a dream
For the children frightened into submission.

© 2008 R(EVOLUTION)


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Building God's kingdom
Through the barrel of gun. - I totally agree.
I believe man created god in his image, not the other way around. Any reference to god is really only a reference to mankind. If, for the sake of argument, god created us in his image, is that really a god you'd want to fight for? I certainly wouldn't. Man uses religion to justify so many evils.
Nice write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


That's great! Short, sort of sweet, and straight to the point! How is one to build God's Kingdom with a gun? That is men building their kingdoms upon the Earth.

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


Dark but true. It is our way. :( Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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