Untitled Poem #1

Not a clue of where this came from... haha.

The waves crashing at our gentle feet,

The way the sky met the oceans grief.

I wish that tonight would never end,

But you, would you still call me your friend?

Author's Note

Popped randomly into my head, let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[solo2be]

It hard to say so much in just a few words. But you did and beautifully I might add.

[Steve]

This is short and sweet.....loved it!

[GTVile]

Very good, and straight to the point. One thing though, "ocean's". Once that is clear, I think its stunning and very powerful for its brevity. Excellent job.