lord of evil deeds

jus something that came to me after reading Lord of the Flies

pretty island,

a thing of paradise,

no one there,

but an evil lingers there,

it's in them all whether or not they know it,

things go well at first,

until thier inner fear and worries come alive,

the meat to eat,

the beast to be gone,

that's what they want after a while,

they forget who they are and what the important things are,

they even forget to think like civilized beings,

thier savages just like the indians in their story books back at home,

home,

what's that?

will they ever see that again?

three won't for sure,

but will the rest?

we'll never know.

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Now who's feeling a lil' evil, dear!!! Reminds me of the Garden of Eden paradise yet contains quite a fright indeed, lol, love the rhythmic sceme also :)