never aging love

the ocean waves that go back and fourth,

seem to go on forever,

like the world we live in,

the gentle waves we hear,

is as slow and continuous as my heart beating for you,

through ever sunset that is seen on this beach,

you stay by my side,

like every rainstorm, that happens,

you keep coming back,

although the days and nights,

come and go,

we may grow older,

but our love doesn't.

Reviews

[Kurera]

very touching TT TT brings me some memories :D

[Damien Davison]

Short and to the point, I liked it. Good job.

[Horizon K.]

Very sweet

[The Invisible Girl]

This is really good and very beautiful! 100/100

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A beautiful hopeful portrayal of lasting love.

[luviva]

ohhh.. thts nyc u shld dedicate it to someone

[constancelovesdarkness]

I did:) my bf and maybe hopefully one day to be called husband:)

[beautiful dreamer]

awwwwwww! i love it :) it's beautiful

[MachinaWriter]

A beautiful poem talking about love's power to outlast all other things. Thank you for sharing this, it was a stunning example of ageless passion and affection.

[Anonymous Girl]

AWW!! So cute!
I love this line:
"we may grow older,
but our love doesn't."

Love it!! ^^