never aging love

the ocean waves that go back and fourth,

seem to go on forever,

like the world we live in,

the gentle waves we hear,

is as slow and continuous as my heart beating for you,

through ever sunset that is seen on this beach,

you stay by my side,

like every rainstorm, that happens,

you keep coming back,

although the days and nights,

come and go,

we may grow older,

but our love doesn't.

Reviews

[Lost Howls]

Lovely almost like looking into a beautiful painting of the ocean and beach. Very nice.

[B-poet]

Staying to together as kindred spirits in love on earth forever in a day. Is quite a special thing when the love is truly genuine between both parties. Nice job. :)

[Jordan's Back]

Sweet, yet simplistic. Excellent Work

[Castonovia]

Awwwww, Const so touching and sweet... from the heart which makes it that much more beautiful (aka your Texas bf). True, neveraging, neverending love... well penned indeed :p

[constancelovesdarkness]

thanks for reviewing this poem like everyone else.. lol

[Castonovia]

Haha, I try... like everyone else XD

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Simply beautiful...perfect love and perfectly written :)

[Lino Rie]

Very well written poem. I wish that all love cold be that way.

[Moon]

This is very sweet ! Too bad all loves can not be like this .

[Ana Drake]

Beautiful poem :)
On the sixth line you typed ever, when you probably meant every. I do it all the time but other than that I loved it!

[constancelovesdarkness]

Thanks:) I have alot of other poems too:) I noticed that grammar error earlier.. Spelling isn't my forte... Lol

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

very sweet and goodluck with ur bf :)

[constancelovesdarkness]

Thanks:) he's put up with meh for four years.. So proud of him.. Lol

[Phillitup]

Beautiful....:)