Brown Bunny, Purple Dress

For a contest. My Alice in Wonderland.

In my Wonderland, things are different.
Not like in the book or movie
things would be my way.

My rabbit would be brown
He'd lead me down
down into a bright hole in a tree

I'd land on a huge bed
with no alarm clock
and he'd take my hand and lead me through a door

No complications
like drinking a certain liquid
or eating strange cakes

When I come through the door
the land will be filled with millions of average animals
mostly bunnies.

I'd get a full tour of the place
Everyone is nice to me
There's no evil animal to battle.

Well, of course there's the queen of hearts
Well kind of
I like the Queen of Diamonds better.

And there's no Cheshire Cat that smiles and disappears.
Instead it's a Cheshire Tiger.
And he sticks his tongue out at you and teleports.

Lastly, there's the Mad Hatter
But instead he's Blood Dupre
From, of course, my favorite Manga book

My Alice in Wonderland is crazy
I'll admit that much
I have my own imagination

Alice wears a purple dress
and the Brown Rabbit doesn't have a clock
But a watch

And when Alice wakes up...
Actually, she doesn't wake up
She stays there forever, it's her new home

I would love to fall through such a hole
land in such a world
meet such people

Live such a life
never wake up
that's my Alice in Wonderland

Author's Note

Not the best poem I've written, but tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Sarah]

Its realy good I love the idear of the purple dress.
XD

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your wonderland. Could use a re-write. A good imagination allow us to travel and have great dreams. I enjoyed the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote