The Cycle of Lies, Using, and Abandonment.

Feeling of loneliness, regret, and anger fill my flesh. 
The lose of a friend. Brings thoughts back from every, last, time. 
Being lost in this world. 
Kindness, being my only savior. 
Used like a piece of meat, 
chopped into blocks. 
Emotions, the only thing to survive. 
Reality, not knowing what that truly means any more. 
Demons locking my body into place. 
Blood flows from me to you. 
But would you give it back? 
Trapping me in your closet with everything else. 
Hanging there. 
Light pushing out of my eyes. 
Darkness, all that's left for my soul. 
Death with one movement. 
Knowing it will never be the same again.

Reviews

[Lucien Maier]

soulful. It is a difficult thing to bear your soul on a page. Most never get the ability to do, I would love to see you transfer this into story with a start and middle and an end, because then the real lessons you have to teach will come out.
good write.

[MAC]

sharing a piece of your heart is not only a difficult thing to do but it is what makes a great poet. excellent write.

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That's deep well done:) I read your bio you sound like a great person, What do you play?

[Dwelling Moments Of A Teenager]

I play the guitar and piano.
But I also sing and write songs

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That's awesome, Ahhh this is real awesome Eddie Van Halen was a player of both Piano and made him a greater guitarist! So yeah. Well you have an all in one deal that's priceless:)

[Dwelling Moments Of A Teenager]

Thank you!
It means so much

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Welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

Light pushing out of my eyes.
Darkness, all that's left for my soul
A nice write...

[Silent_Whispers]

This poem is very dark and haunting, i really liked it though. I like your stong use of dark, vivid imagery. Its very good.