Helpless

Helpless

A Poem by Dwelling Moments Of A Teenager

Cut my wrists and paint me black.
Shadows resting upon her face,
Giggling, laughing at the way I am.
Quietly gagging on people's secrets. 
Yelling for just a little bit more out of you.

Nothing to give.
Moving to lose.

A loner in a closet. 
Darkness her only friend.
One tear everyday,
Only to know she was still human.
Emotionless, dazed, confused.
Her inner shell consuming her skin she lives in. 
No longer in part of any beast there is. 

The mark's across her body,

Signals to the world for a little help to breathe.

Ringing of continuous silent bells fill's the air. 

The blood stain carpet 
A reminder of what could of been saved.
The lose of one poor girl,
Triggering others to crack.

I cared, loved, cried, for her.
In reality, she was lost. 
Unattached. 
Abandoned.

"People only notice when your dead,"
The last words she spoke.
Water in, air out.
Lungs full, curtains closed.
A reminder that death is always near.

© 2012 Dwelling Moments Of A Teenager


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That was very bone chilling. Your imagery was good, and you conveyed the emotion of helplessness well. My favorite stanza would have to be:

"People only notice when your dead,"
The last words she spoke.
Water in, air out.
Lungs full, curtains closed.
A reminder that death is always near."

If this was from an experience my heart goes out to you. Good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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BEATIFULL!!! lovvvvveeeed it. briliant

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was very bone chilling. Your imagery was good, and you conveyed the emotion of helplessness well. My favorite stanza would have to be:

"People only notice when your dead,"
The last words she spoke.
Water in, air out.
Lungs full, curtains closed.
A reminder that death is always near."

If this was from an experience my heart goes out to you. Good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dwelling Moments Of A Teenager

Hamilton, New Zealand



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Hi, I'm Bethan from Hamilton, New Zealand I'm 17, and go to Waikato University. more..

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