Life

a philosophers outlook on life

Life is a daze

In a word you could say it's that awkward teenage phase

It's a state of doing right or wrong

kinda like how some girls wear granny panties and others wear thongs

Life is a series of curves running at full throttle 

The similar curves that women share to coke bottles

One minute your gazing at the stars

And the next ran over by your ex-girlfriend's car

Life is like wearing a jock strap

It's sweaty and rides you like a b***h 

But in the end you are grateful for that tender itch

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I like the playful humor in this.. Ended with a hilarious but "fitting" analogy... Nice compare and contrast with "gazing at the stars" to "getting ran over by your girlfriend's car"... That is life... up and down... Some nuggets of truth sprinkled with clever funny phrasing.. nicely done..

[catman17]

Thank you. This was a for fun poem I wrote for my friend who actually got ran over by his ex-girlfriend's car, but it does me good to know I did well,

[AprilRN1210]

You're welcome... Humor after a situation like that is what keeps some of us sane.. yes, you did well:)

[Frontier]

Hahaha I love the depth of this intertwined with humor, a rare occurrence! Every "stanza" was completely original, I enjoyed this fully.

[catman17]

well thank you kindly