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A Poem by Toasty (Erin)

I choke back the unwanted tears

From the pain I feel, tearing at me.

I had to stay strong for once

No that you're gone everything feels blank

the scars left behind something the town couldn't ignore

They put up a fight and you suffered

You aren't crazy just, lost.

I saw what they did, with that needle,

Tranquilizer

I miss you so much

One day I will leave and hopefully

You will be thier with me..

Not in another cage, like the animal you are not

© 2011 Toasty (Erin)


Author's Note

Toasty (Erin)
Im planning on doing a seris of poems surronding this setting... Tell what you think of that? Please

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Interesting....it's like an unfinished story. I'm curious to see what you add to this as a series. It would help if you add a title to it of course...unless the title is No Title, in which case, it's either intriguing to others or confusing. I did catch two grammatical errors.
"No that you're gone everything feels blank"~ Now that you're gone everything feels blank
"You will be thier with me.."~You will be there with me..
Again, I'm curious to see where you go with this, so keep it up ^_~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Toasty (Erin)
Toasty (Erin)

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I am a young writer who spends too much tim with books and notebooks. I love to read and write, I can write a short story in uncer a day and I can finish off a book in under 24 hours if I stayed up lo.. more..

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