Exorcised Friendship

Exorcised Friendship

A Poem by Firebird
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Saying Goodbye

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I am Lucy the undead,
You never saw my light,
You only saw my darkness,
You drove your stake deep 
To set me free.

© 2015 Firebird


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You know this reminded me of a toxic friendship. Absolutely no point in hoping it will work. Some people have that effect on others.

Chris



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

3 Years Ago

Thank you Chris. That is what it was about. Thank you for getting it.
Yeah. Like a lot of my poems its pretty pretentious sounding I guess. I enjoyed this one though and I meant it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I feel this one features a sort of open ending. The images seem highly metaphoric and kind of cinematic at the same time. Nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

8 Years Ago

Yeah. Like a lot of my poems it's pretty pretentious sounding I guess. I enjoyed this one though and.. read more
It's hard to lose people, but if the relationship is unhealthy...we do what we have to do.
Time to fly.
z.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

8 Years Ago

Thanks Z x
Zugzwang

8 Years Ago

Have a good one 😊
Firebird

8 Years Ago

You too! 🌏
Free!!
I hope to see you, Lucy, "in the sky with diamonds"....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

8 Years Ago

Thank you Terry. :-)

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