Still Pond

Still Pond

A Poem by Firebird
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Meditation haiku

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I am the still pond
bitter wind flowing over
waiting for the sun

© 2015 Firebird


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yes, if only we can keep still until the turmoil has flowed over and a new sun appears.

something like all that is going on in the world...all the chaos...
and we are keeping still...steady, waiting.

nicely done haiku----with shades of senryu in it...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

9 Years Ago

Thank you I never heard of Senryu..showing my ignorance. I used this poem when I had a very stressfu.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

senryu is the same form as haiku, same syllable count, only haiku is strictly about nature...and sen.. read more
Firebird

9 Years Ago

Oh OK thanks! :-)



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yes, if only we can keep still until the turmoil has flowed over and a new sun appears.

something like all that is going on in the world...all the chaos...
and we are keeping still...steady, waiting.

nicely done haiku----with shades of senryu in it...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

9 Years Ago

Thank you I never heard of Senryu..showing my ignorance. I used this poem when I had a very stressfu.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

senryu is the same form as haiku, same syllable count, only haiku is strictly about nature...and sen.. read more
Firebird

9 Years Ago

Oh OK thanks! :-)
Nicely done. Uplifting and inspirational words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Firebird

9 Years Ago

Thank you. :-) I used it the other day when I was in a stressful situation and it worked quite well!

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Added on November 18, 2015
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Firebird

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