Phoenix

Haiku

the phoenix rises

golden feathers forged in fire

reborn triumphant

Reviews

[Eggman]

A great little haiku! I love the little trip through vowels preceded by f (feathers forged in fire), which really rolled off the toungue in a satisfying manner. I also like the musicality of the third line - it sounded almost like a brass section to me. Well thought out poetry, I look forward to more!

-eggman

[Firebird]

Thanks eggman for a helpful revue. I am just making things up as i go along...not sure what works and what doesnt. I would welcome comments on my other work if you ever have time. I started off with haiku and i'm just beginning to try longer poetry.

[Eggman]

I'll for sure look at some more of your work in a bit! :)

[Gaia Octavia]

I love this. So much. Well done!

[Firebird]

Thank you. I'm glad.

[Zugzwang]

I really enjoyed this haiku, I think it's your best yet!

[Firebird]

Yeah well...I am a firebird aren't I ? It came naturally.

[Zugzwang]

Yar, great piece too.