The Moth

A Poem by Firebird

slow strangulation

tight web of my own making

tonight the moth flies

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Nice haiku. I like the alliteration in the first line and the slant rhyme in the initial couplet. Well crafted.

Thank you Zeitnot. You see things I don't see. I just write things I like the sound of.

Yar, well, you've got a good ear!

Haha! Thanks

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Added on October 30, 2015
Last Updated on November 2, 2015

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