doubts

i am unsure
as to whether this was admiration
or love
and i am unsure
as to why it hurt me so bad
or ruined me so much
but i am sure
that i was worthless to you
and i am sure
you did not need me
in the same way i needed you

as if you were the oxygen i needed to breathe
suddenly
my air supply was cut off
and suddenly
you were gone
and once again
i am alone
and wondering
will anyone ever need me
enough to stay
longer than they intend?

A.I

Reviews

[SSKaitlyn]

Simplicity breathes life to woe. I enjoyed the words written very much, and could relate. It strikes a sentimental cord in my heart, and that's why I'm leaving a good rating.

Only thing I would have changed is capitalization. Or maybe not. Somehow it adds to the writing. I can't put my finger on it. But ignore what I just said. I'd leave it. Let the piece as whole speak for itself.

[a poet]

thank u so much !! I'm glad you could relate to it, I think its nice other people can feel how I do through words. I do most of my poems in lowercase, not sure why but it's just been my thing I guess. thank u a lot though !!!

[Ashly]

wow
it resonates within
has meaning
anyone can relate to this easily, me included

[a poet]

thank u so much !!! like I said to another commenter, I'm really glad others can feel my feelings through the words and can relate, it means a lot to me !!