A nice realistic poem, cool to read. Fine mod style. Thumbs up.
I'm a newbie here, pls read my poems but pleez review/comment only my 2nd , my newest poem here, titled "scenery medley contrasts " , wud luv to know your thoughts, Always nice to meet poem pals. And I like to know if my poem is easily understood as intended.
I like this.
It says so many different things yet the theme or main idea is the same-loneliness for one. This was sad to read but i like it.
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
thanks jennifer :) :) it was something i knew i had to write so ppl can get to know me a lil bit bet.. read morethanks jennifer :) :) it was something i knew i had to write so ppl can get to know me a lil bit better :)
It's very good to be able to understand ourselves. It's easy to only see the negatives about ourselves, but being able to acknowledge the good and the bad is healthy and shows a certain strength of character.
Justin,
You know, My New Friend, even though you are (obviously) your own unique person, you remind me a lot of me, too … probably, not in looks, but that person inside you. Sorry, guy, no insult meant … LOL!
You speak very highly of yourself, and I think that it's good to have a healthy self-image … it is far better than kicking one's self around, eh? : )
Seems you've a lot to be proud of, some worthwhile personal challenges that will make you stronger and even more proud of yourself, a person with a great capacity to love, a determined individual, too, that will not easily give-up, etc; a fellow with a true winner's spirit whom should never be lonely with all that going for you.
Look into the mirror, smile, and embrace your fabulous self … you deserve a pat on the back, too, for writing this excellent Free Verse poem … and, most of all, thanks a zillion for sharing You with Us, Justin! ⁓ Richard : )
I love that picture of your beautiful puppy … it looks very happy and healthy. ; D