PICTURES

PICTURES

A Story by Justin
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Looking at pictures, there is so much you can say. The picture for my story is one that I have taken.

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Pictures are something I enjoy taking. Each picture has its own little story behind. A story that many people who do take pictures don't really think about, they just take them. Pictures are something that last forever. They have memories that we as people can go back and talk about about in the future. The stories behind what was taken are the most amazing part. What was taken gets me curious, what did the object go through in past, what is going to happen to it in the future, how many people have seen that object, has something bad happened to it, has the scenery changed around it. Those questions make taking pictures worth taking.

© 2015 Justin


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Given that every comment I read was from people who were more daft than three Polocks riding a unicycle built for two, it falls to me to sort this mess out.

As a Still Life, I suppose this is fine. But as for this 'message' that people claim to be seeing, it's just not there. It isn't. I understand you're trying to convey an artistic idea, but it fell short. It felt more like a school report about pictures than artistic expression.

I feel like I've been leaving nothing but negative reviews on your posts, but just know that I'm not trying to be harsh. I'm trying to be as constructive as I can be. I want to give advice that will help you write better, but I'm not sure how I can help with this. It's just...boring. It doesn't make me think. It was actually a struggle to get through.

But that's because I was trying to see this 'message' every other person claimed to see. There's no message whatsoever. Nothing is conveyed but obvious information and Jaden Smith-esque ponderings.

However, if everyone else is just crazy and this was meant as a Still Life, non-fiction, journal entry then you're good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Given that every comment I read was from people who were more daft than three Polocks riding a unicycle built for two, it falls to me to sort this mess out.

As a Still Life, I suppose this is fine. But as for this 'message' that people claim to be seeing, it's just not there. It isn't. I understand you're trying to convey an artistic idea, but it fell short. It felt more like a school report about pictures than artistic expression.

I feel like I've been leaving nothing but negative reviews on your posts, but just know that I'm not trying to be harsh. I'm trying to be as constructive as I can be. I want to give advice that will help you write better, but I'm not sure how I can help with this. It's just...boring. It doesn't make me think. It was actually a struggle to get through.

But that's because I was trying to see this 'message' every other person claimed to see. There's no message whatsoever. Nothing is conveyed but obvious information and Jaden Smith-esque ponderings.

However, if everyone else is just crazy and this was meant as a Still Life, non-fiction, journal entry then you're good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truly beautiful :) I never really thought about how pictures have a message, but now every time i see an old picture of mine, I'll think of the good ol' days :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i agree...each photo has a story all its own...and oddly enough the story often changes based on the space frame it was viewed from...

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is well-written, and it's a really cool take on the concept. I like it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I will be honest, I have never really thought about pictures in that perspective! You gave me a new outlook on something new. I can't really say I take pictures all the time,but I love looking back at them and really you can just feel like you're going back in time to that moment of your life. Great write and keep writing!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) i just gave u an idea :) the picture where the title is, is one i took :)
Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Great job on taking the picture. I'm seeing that you may have many other different talents that you .. read more
I thought I was the only one who felt this way. You just get it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) it is awesome that u feel the same way
I have the same thoughts and questions when it comes to the subject behind the picture.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) :) :) that is awesome:)
The best thing about a picture is that each one is unique in its own way. They individually have a story to tell. Based upon the subject and atmosphere, they can trigger a variety of emotions.

Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks for commenting :) i agree with you, no two pictures are the same :)
I too think about all those questions when I look at a picture. I try to imagine the story behind all of them and the characters. I thought I was the only one, glad I'm not alone :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) at least i am not the only one who thinks these questions
Very well done!

I've read all of your work in a matter of 10 minutes, and I just want more and more.

I've got to say, I'm going to enjoy seeing you around. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) :) :) u will see me around
Melanie Stroud

9 Years Ago

Good :) I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.
Justin

9 Years Ago

thanks :) :) :) :)

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