Time to Fly

not letting people stand in your way even if they're the reason for where you are today

I'm always flying too high or too low, never just right

So I swelter form the sun,

Get dampend by the sea,

Things never went my way

Until that day came

When you saved the day.

 

You taught me where to fly ,

You saved me from the burden of the sky,

So now I say thank you for what you have done,

For I would not be where I am today without you.

But now things have gone to far,

Your beginin to control my every move,

Not letting me expand my wings in unknown places,

You want me to stay here with you.

 

I'm sorry for I cannot

I've learned how to fly

So now I must go.

Don't try to follow for you will fail,

Don't worry I will not disapear.

I will come backe one day,

Not long from now,

When I ready to stay put and make some vows.

 

So now i say adue,

As i cross the ocean blue.

Author's Note

not a poet
wanted to try something new
ignore grammar mistakes/problem

Reviews

[DontBlink158]

i really liked it, i could see everything.
Hey im not a poet either so i was right were you are now, i think you are good, keep going!! (but mabey i dont count so..)
ANYway great poem!

[Max]

I like the imagery and emotion in this poem. Even though you say your not a poet this is good

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Emotional write, wonderfully written and expressed

[CathleenB]

some nice emotional imagery.

[Kestrova]

I can relate to the feeling behind this and the third stanza especially. I loved the rhyme scheme in the second. A good read and a fine poem. :)

[Just Me]

Really awesome. Totally great. Loved it.