Indestructible

Last fall, my mom had a HUGE break down. It only lasted a weekend, and then she managed to pull herself back together for the rest of my siblings. But for those two days, I was the only one there.

She's stayed by you

When you're sick

When you're sad 

She holds your hand.

Indestructible. 

She walked beside you

When you stumbled

When you fell 

She picked you up.

Indestructible.

She comforted you

When you were hurt

When you were sad

She cheered you up.

Indestructible.

Your rock

Your foundation

Your courage 

And your strenth

She never let you down. 

Indestructible.

Then there's that moment

The one that changes things

Shows you how they really are

And now you're...

Her rock

Her foundation

Her courage

And her strenth

You can't let her down.

Because of that moment

The one that changes things

The one where indestructible

Turns into destroyed.

Reviews

[Tamia123]

Wow that was intense! I could feel the emotion and that's when you know a poems good :) Great job with this one!!!

[SuddenCognito]

I didn't see the ending coming at all, you did it really well, I thought this poem was going to be boring and just end on the word indestructible but I'm glad I read it all and saw the end! :) Fits together perfectly.