Undressed

a pitcher of sunshine
pours through undressed
window glass
a pure liquid gold
to pool on white sheets
crumpled in disarray
drenching exposed toes
kissing ankles
to settle on veiled thighs
how warm starts my day

Reviews

[Stella Armour]

i think you wrote this whilst still in bed, and those exposed toes i can relate to lol.
Sensual but just enough to feel the warmth beneath those veiled thighs.
A lovely, natural and appealing write Chris ... :)
Stella

[Chris Shaw]

You are so right Stella.I wrote this lazing in bed and enjoying that sunshine through the window:) Hoping soring has arrived. Sunny, but cool. Enjoy Tuesday.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

I spent an hour in the garden yesterday and i can't tell you how much it lifted my spirits.Just waking, as you said in your poem sunshine pouring in the window makes you smile :)

[Chris Shaw]

Same here today Stella. I am going to be working in my garden too. The sun certainly raises the spirits:)

[W. Barrett Munn]

Delightful Chris. Warm sunshine can be like hot chocolate.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Winston. Yes sunshine can be like hot chocolate. Very warming. Have a good Tuesday.

Chris

[Vol]

Chris,
Warm? Sounds like it might even get hot...
and sweaty...
Vol

[Chris Shaw]

I don’t do sweaty Vol ha ha. Thanks for stopping by. Have a good day.

Chris

[Dylan Macadham]

Warm & lovely words, Chris, on a Sunday morning (here), in images of a thoroughly satisfying waking :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dylan. Pleased you enjoyed my Sunday poem. Have a good Tuesday.

Chris

[Katrina Mckeown]

Lucky for some eh? I'm jealous lol it's so over cast cold and windy here
At least I have the privilege of reading your beautifully penned poem.. I catch a glimmer of warmth whilst reading.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks for a lovely review Katrina. We have sun, but it is still so cold. Have a lovely Tuesday. read moreThanks for a lovely review Katrina. We have sun, but it is still so cold. Have a lovely Tuesday.

Chris

[red93]

Beautiful as ever Chris. Spring appears to have arrived in Bristol UK as well today. What a Blessing. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tony. I hope the sun brings some warmth soon. Lovely and sunny, but still so cold. Have a great Tuesday.

Chris

[MCS]

What a delightful read! I’m envious, its dark and gloomy here with the mercury below zero.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Mary. Hope you get some Sun and light soon, and some warmth. We have sunshine, but it is still so cold. All the best.

Chris