Undressed

a pitcher of sunshine
pours through undressed
window glass
a pure liquid gold
to pool on white sheets
crumpled in disarray
drenching exposed toes
kissing ankles
to settle on veiled thighs
how warm starts my day

Reviews

[Lorry]

Hopefully Chris, this is a precursor to spring whivh im told is about to start any time soon.
Its a toss up really between believing that and depending on your news of choice, snowmageddon coming in the form of the beast from the east volume 2.
I know which one we'd all prefer though! 😀
Liquid gold sunshine or a long trudge through the white stuff, while wishing our parents were from barbados! Hmm, touch choice! 😁

[D. Mansfield]

Love the "pitcher of sunshine"

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful imagery and use of the senses.

[Stella Armour]

i think you wrote this whilst still in bed, and those exposed toes i can relate to lol.
Sensual but just enough to feel the warmth beneath those veiled thighs.
A lovely, natural and appealing write Chris ... :)
Stella

[W. Barrett Munn]

Delightful Chris. Warm sunshine can be like hot chocolate.

[Vol]

Chris,
Warm? Sounds like it might even get hot...
and sweaty...
Vol

[Dylan Macadham]

Warm & lovely words, Chris, on a Sunday morning (here), in images of a thoroughly satisfying waking :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

Lucky for some eh? I'm jealous lol it's so over cast cold and windy here
At least I have the privilege of reading your beautifully penned poem.. I catch a glimmer of warmth whilst reading.

[red93]

Beautiful as ever Chris. Spring appears to have arrived in Bristol UK as well today. What a Blessing. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[MCS]

What a delightful read! I’m envious, its dark and gloomy here with the mercury below zero.